Reviews for Before and Beyond
tabitha.scott.923 chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
That was a very sad story and it's making me cry. Keep up the good work. Poor goten and trunks
souhoku chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
I actually cried. Well, almost anyways. I literally had tears in my eyes when I read this and poor Goten and Trunks and everybody really.

This was just written really well and I really love it. I cannot believe I did not come across this sooner. The only Trunks and Goten fanfics I can find are romance and I really just love the way you described their friendship.

This was just amazing and yeah, I know perfectly well this review is 10 years late.

:o
Xxsilver-dragonnessxX chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
*cries*…*sniffs*...That was sooo sad…A great story, sweet as well, but very, very sad…it actually made me cry. I haven’t read a story this deep since well…since…I don’t know, probably forever. I think this is an amazing story!
Vicious-Loner chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
*sniffs* I'm crying so hard I can barely see because it was so heartwrenchingly sad. The pain and sadness really gets through and it almost hurts me too. Thank you for writing this beautiful tearjerker, thank you.
Gothicthundra chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
Wow... I cried... alot... I said the exact same thing Goten said when my friend died/ this was an amazing and emotional fic.
XXXFlame-HazeXXX chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
-sniffle- okay, that was sad. Sweet ... but sad. T.T But on a lighter note ... great job, you had me hooked the whole way through. Keep up the great work .

-sniffle- Just give me a sec. -sniffle-
ShayL chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
God, wow, this was really something. I mean, the possibilty of Trunks catching the heart disease when he was a baby never came to mind, which is surprising because babies are especially vulnerable to any sort of diseases, that I know. Well, anyways, this was a wonderful reflection on Goten's feelings and it made me really happy that he kept the jacket, haha. Trunks being all flirtatious with Goten in the car was interesting as well, needless to say, haha. Sorry, this is a crappy review, but I honestly can't think of anything better than: AWESOME! SO GREAT! YOU'RE AN AMAZING WRITER! LOLZ! ETC ETC ETC!... yeah.
happychica chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
(cries)

glad to know people can still write stuff like this, even if it made me cry so hard I couldn't see. maybe I'm just a softy. thanks for writing, I needed it.

(cries)
Loralee X5-214 chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
hey! omg that was so sad! but again still greatly written! aww stupid gokuu killing trunks! god he killed the hottesy guy there! and wow i can SOO realate 2 what gotens going/went threw. I havn't had a BFF ever die [god firbid] but i can asume i'd do they same thing...but i'd have the biggest like tantrem/spazz in the hospital...wow! i'd probably try and kill the guy that did it...and i'm a 16 year old saying this! but yes again i TOTALLY loved it!
Alison 4523 chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
I just have one word... WOW.

Ok, i have a few more. Man, I havne't read a story in a long time that touched me as deeply as this did. I know I stated in a pervious review that you have a way of writing that really brings out what you're trying to get the reader to see, and damn you know how to do it so well you had me crying... and ignoring the piles of paperwork on my desk I should be doing right about now.

I'm adding this story to my favorites and I have a few friends who I think will enjoy it, so hopefully you'll get a few more reviews. I always believe in passing along good works to my friends and man, this is probably one of the best I've read in a long time.

One tiny critisizm. You wrote that Goten found Trunks in Bridge Town... then you stated a few paragraphs later that Trunks had to go to Bridgetown and Goten wondered why because Trunks never went there... and they were already there. You might want to revise that.

But overall... just wow. Keep up the great work.
koriaena chapter 1 . 9/23/2004
.. T_T i almost started to cry! that's a very well written story...
ArmyMuseOfSorrow chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
Oh wow. Im sitting bawling my eyes out over a fan fic story. Never saw that one coming. You are a awesome and incredible writer. I am litarly sitting here sobbing on my keyboard. I love this story. You just a amazing writer
Blue T. Topaz chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
*crying* You've gotta read these storys when you're on your period *Sniff* Don't know if its a good thing or bad...but hey...you got me crying...
Blue T. Topaz chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
Ack! Gotta stop crying! Shit...you know..that no story has ever... EVER...been able to get me this close to crying...Man...I gotta stop...I'm in a library...If i cry here...my brother is going to have a field day...Great story...got a napkin?

Blue
ryder77 chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
I can't believe I missed this one! I could have sworn I've checked out all the Trunks & Goten (non-yaoi) fics in this entire site, and I only found this today?
good thing I decided to do check random authors :)
To be perfectly honest, this fic has more than one tear-jerker section (it's 12K words long!), and I had to stop every time the tears started coming so people around me won't start looking at me funny. When I get back, however, they just keep coming back!
You have a gift for expressing emotions for writing. I'm looking forward to reading your other works _
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