Reviews for Harry Potter and the Strength to Fight |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was a bloody awesome story...well done. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! I just wanted to say that I found the plot of this story to be really good and not as clichéd as some stories where Harry learns in the beginning how he's been betrayed (even if some of those are good too). I think it has a lot of depth. The only negative thing I have to say is that your grammar is not quite up to par with your plot-ability (especially concerning tempus) and your sentence structure could get a bit better. That said, I think this is a very good story overall! Sincerely, LoonyLinday |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a top quality story. good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() dhocking actions |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice job so far. its good |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() GREAT STORY! A FANFIC CLASSIC! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jusdt so very neat. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What did Voldie do that they could barely walk? I seriously didn't think he was like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it when all hell breaks loose! Thing get so interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have just read your story - a good story, thank tou for puting it up. Best regards /Bill |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story! Hopefully, you're writing others. It's brilliant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story and keep writing this was really good. |