Your narrative moves from past to present tense and back again, often within a single sentence. This makes it very hard to follow. You need to pay more attention to the tense your verbs are in. Your story line is interesting so far but the grammatical inconsistencies are a huge detraction. Keep writing, you can only improve with practice.

Deputy head mistress. I knew snape was a git but didn't realize he was a girl!

Why might I ask does harry still not trust dear old dumbles

You're so close to being the next J.K Rowling!

What happened to Hedwig?!

awesome

NIGHT NOT NITE

This is great great work. I haven't seen any like this since before my last deployment to Fight ISIS

I sorta like reading about him becoming powerful cuz it's hilarious to see people's reactions. P.s. I hope blaze goes to hogwarts with him

Everything's too easy - especially the glasses, since the first of those weren't invented until about 1280. Want Harry to have magical items? Fine. But you went overboard. Two to four, at most, with only one or two being relatively powerful, if that. This is to maintain some degree of believability. And the paired wands are very unlikely to have been a fit for Harry. Remember Olivander: 'No wand will work as well with another as with the one it has chosen'. In other words, the whole thing is full of holes.

What the fuck? Why did you say Sirius black was the correct answer and not wormtail

Screw it! Harry should raise the entire world to the ground. Dumbledore and all those bitches deserve to die and Harry should be able to do it without one ounce of regret.

Have to admit that at first I wasn't sure if I would like this story but now I have to stay hat this was a really cool and amazing story. There were some boring parts that were hard to get through but other then that I really liked the story.

I am only on chapter 15 right now but I am pretty sure I know who both the spie and the admirer are.

I was right about Harry being the admirer.
-Lol