You are fucking retarded.

You’re a spineless wimp.

Harry tells everyone he doesn’t want show his skills in front of others and immediately Remus and Tonks try to force him? You are so fucking stupid it’s amazing you’re literate.

More idiot Harry. With all the people who want Harry dead, WHY THE FUCK WOULD HE TRUST A STRANGER RIGHT AWAY?! This writer is criminally stupid.

So much for getting away to be alone. Harry continues to be a fucking idiot.

I’m out. The summary clearly stated that Harry revolted against dumbldor. All I can see is idiot Harry still sucking that old wankers dick. This writer is a fucking moron.

Another idiotic writer who makes the OOTP out to be good guys when they are all actively helping the death eaters by using idiotic tactics in war and helping abuse and torture Harry. What. A. Fucking. Moron.

I’ve already lost interest because this Harry is still a fucking idiot and a pussy. You have already failed if this wasn’t your intention.

Yet none of three died in the final battle you nitwit!

Read through this twice now and I still enjoy it

One of the most promising but ending up as one of the worst fanfics at least in certain plots especially high inconsistencies in all the promises and powers of Potter's, ability of 3 not even one Phoenixes and Blaze as silent guardians; Harry's training for all stupid futile worth and high failure rate in his fights and ambushes. Didn't like it at all, sorry for all the promise this story had shown. Couldn't hold the attention at all.

Really stupid plot really! For all your description of Harry was now at the level of an auror or more. He gets easily hurt, injured, almost killed, for all his expertise in stealth forgets basic necessity of wearing hood. For all the basic need of remaining in a safe place, not telling anyone spectacularly makes a blunder and roams freely in Hogsmeade. As if his home doesn't has enough space for all the thinking about school. What stupid description of fights and irritating. Harry says big words, makes big proclamations but when it comes to fighting fails spectacularly after all that training and so called improvement!

It's a bit of a stretch, don't you think? That Harry has this mansion and phoenixes and a white tiger? Not exactly conventional.

J'ai bien aimée ton histoire à part les noms des enfants.
Merci pour cette belle histoire

An absolutely wonderful story

Keep writing as life allows