|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Strength to Fight|
| Radical7 chapter 11 . 5/2/2011
I think the selections for the academic team were pretty off. There were 2 5th years, when there were several older students who would definitely know more (atleast Terry and Susan). And what is up with Ginerva being in everything?
Sorry if I'm being a bit mean, but I'm not a fan of Ginny 'fangirl' Weasley.
| Radical7 chapter 10 . 5/1/2011
Nice story so far. I wanted to know more about his training and abilities which you kind of skimmed over. The promise of new types of magic is interesting, and I hope that you develop that. The plot of the challenge from Durmstrang is also promising. Reading on now...
| Mrs Yaya chapter 40 . 4/16/2011
WANT TO COMMEND YOU ON A JOB WELL DONE WITH THIS STORY. MAYBE IN THE FUTURE YOU WILL DO ANOTHER COMPANION PIECE TO THIS STORY.
| nightlight's fire chapter 40 . 1/4/2011
Quite a nice piece of work. I like the manipulative Dumbledore, because you make it seem more like he wants to control and that he believes that he is doing the right thing. That's a good part of the plot. I don't really believe in the cliche of the all the magical races having some sort of governing body. I think it's a bit of an odd assumption. I like you eventually had Harry reconnect with Luna, Neville and Hermione. I think that Luna and Neville betraying Harry was a bit odd and way out of character, but overall it was good. One grammar thing though, it should be:
Harry said, "Hello."
"Hello," said Harry.
Harry said "Hello."
| soulbond chapter 29 . 11/5/2010
i know it really doesnt matter at this point but i say harry hateing the world
| TrueLoveCanHappen chapter 23 . 10/21/2010
I completly agree, all hell is about to break loose, i hope that Harry kicks everyones butt. by the way love the story so far. :)
| fireburnshot chapter 32 . 9/25/2010
Bravo...or Brava as the case may be. Even in the first book I wondered about Molly not knowing where platform 9-3/4 was, and using the word 'muggle.'
I have said this to many people...lol, so I'm not just rying to butter you up.
| LadiShawa chapter 40 . 8/25/2010
This is hands down one of the best stories I've read on here!
I love a powerful Harry :)
I would love for you to write another story.
| iKitten chapter 40 . 6/14/2010
your story is good however you really need to work on your past and present tense, like "has happened" should be had happened. If your story is written in a way that things have already happened then you need to write it as such, other than that your story was very good.
| Scabbers1957 chapter 40 . 4/22/2010
This was a bloody awesome story...well done.
| LoonyLinday chapter 40 . 1/11/2010
I just wanted to say that I found the plot of this story to be really good and not as clichéd as some stories where Harry learns in the beginning how he's been betrayed (even if some of those are good too). I think it has a lot of depth.
The only negative thing I have to say is that your grammar is not quite up to par with your plot-ability (especially concerning tempus) and your sentence structure could get a bit better.
That said, I think this is a very good story overall!
| Horacrux777 chapter 34 . 12/30/2009
this is a top quality story. good job
| tedlay chapter 30 . 12/19/2009
| Horacrux777 chapter 2 . 11/20/2009
nice job so far. its good
| gauravmittal2 chapter 1 . 11/6/2009