|Reviews for Something Velveteen|
| Transcendentalist Tangencies chapter 4 . 7/19/2012
This was cute! :D
| S.RAYN chapter 3 . 4/15/2011
I really love this story and I have to wonder why I haven't read it before. It is really well written and detailed. You have a way emotions and words especially how you wrote the passing of the year. Wonderful fanfiction like yours is what keeps me coming back to . :D
| Cheska chapter 4 . 3/30/2011
The only way to describe this is that it's fluffy and sweet.
| underhandlilies chapter 4 . 10/14/2010
This story was so sweet...it had me laughing and crying all at the same time!
And Tidus is SO ADORABLE! I want plushies of him and Sora!
| LostMySightToLight chapter 3 . 9/22/2010
YOU TWO ARE GENIUSES! I LOVED THIS STORY! IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL!
| Stormbringer246 chapter 4 . 8/25/2010
So I love love love this story. It feels so -Christmas-. Even though I'm sitting here baking in the heat at the end of August, I can still see the snow, remember what it's like to breathe it in, and just get cheerfully into the "Christmas spirit". Out of everything that i have seen and read, this takes the cake for fitting the mood best and so perfectly. It wasn't cliche' with a scrooge Riku being haunted by the three spirits, but was nice and fresh.
However, I hate the epilogue (which is an unusual strong sentiment, really) but i will explain why: The story itself was beautifully crafted. It had sweetness, innocence, freshness, scroogery, etc. It seemed carefully planned and well laid out with many threads at the end leaving endless possibilities on how it could go on. The epilogue touched none of these. It answered one question that readers had "did they get together?" "yes". But nothing else. It automatically jumped into the realm of sex from a fic that had before felt so innocent, and I think most disappointingly of all had no Tidus. He was made out to be a really important character to Riku, but wasn't featured in the epilogue. It had none of the previous spirit from the other chapters, and felt more like "yay we're going to show how close these two have gotten and give the perv's on what they've been waiting for. Because who -really- reads these for plot, right? LOLOL."
But with that being said, I loved the fic as a whole. Thank you so much for putting the time and effort into it and putting it out on the interwebz to share with everyone else.
| dockingdisney chapter 4 . 7/21/2010
i dont normally support SoRiku, but this was just
too cute! great job!
| xXxAlotLikeLovexXx chapter 4 . 9/8/2009
Well, I should have reviewed this story from the very first chapter but I was so eager to keep on reading! I ABSOLUTELY love how you captured Sora's personality without him being too over-bearing!
And I can easily see him do those things without any trouble. It's really sweet.
Each chapter made my heart bubble with warm feelings and I love the whole family scene. So simple yet so spectacular. And I found it hilarious when Riku was so clueless when it came to interacting with Sora's family.
Christmas and romance *sighh*
This story is just too adorable to describe! The whole notion of your story made me all go whimsy and hopeless romantic! :) ILOVEIT!
I have so say, you made my day! Thank you!
| teddikins chapter 4 . 8/22/2009
really really cute (and really bad eggs, JKS!)
SO MUCH LOVE!\
| singingstars chapter 4 . 7/12/2009
Aha I love how Riku thought that a cheerful Sora equals a nightmare for Riku XD
And the ending is absolutely hilarious and adorable at the same time! & Riku is veerry sexy _-
| singingstars chapter 3 . 7/12/2009
Aww this chapter is adorable! It makes me in the Christmas mood even though its only SUMMER! XD Its cute how in the end, its practically exactly like in the beginning ]
| singingstars chapter 2 . 7/12/2009
My god, I was smiling and laughing and giggling through out this WHOLE chapter! XD Its all so random and I love how Sora's family is just as crazy and entergetic as himself!
| singingstars chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
Aha Its kind of funny how Riku is all emo in this and Sora is the total opposite. I could tell this is going to be a interesting time at dinner!
| Kaoru Gal chapter 4 . 1/6/2009
So cute! Sora was adorable and Riku was just so so Riku-ish. Yeah, I can't even find a word to describe it. I loved the ending and everything! Definitely a fav
| 12q chapter 4 . 11/17/2008
I really enjoyed reading this story :) Though there were stereotypes in there, it was a pleasurable and very nice fiction. My cheeks still hurt because I couldn't stop grinning - I just couldn't! I tried it, but the grin would always creep back on my face and... gah. I really, really like and it was well written and... heh.