Reviews for You're WHAT!
Guest chapter 3 . 9/7/2014
Red X? Seriously? You should switch Raven with Starfire! But still, pretty good.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/5/2014
lol robin "IT"S SLADE!"
very well written and very funny:)
my only thought was that raven was a little too senstive for her personality
but overall great
update SOON?!
lavalloveseris chapter 3 . 7/8/2014
good story
Matilda chapter 3 . 6/29/2014
TheCupcakeCutie chapter 3 . 6/8/2014
Cooooooooooontinue itttttttt or else im gonna explode you with my C4
Told ya to continue it
Guest chapter 3 . 1/12/2014
love it!
Noir Victorian chapter 3 . 9/8/2013
kool write more
CouchThief chapter 3 . 12/12/2012
You do know there is something called a paragraph, right?
lillostlove chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
can you write more to this? its really good
moosehugger chapter 3 . 10/17/2008
writingtitan chapter 3 . 4/12/2008
I LOVE IT ADD MORE ASAP Oh this has got to be one of my favorites on this site loved it gosh wow!
lovex3spell chapter 3 . 5/14/2005
Hm... What to say...

1) I enjoyed reading your story, and I am looking forward to what will happen in subsequent chapters.

2) Can you please separate your story into paragraphs? Reading this big blob of words hurts my eyes... _ Separate the dialoge, monologue, etc.

ex. Raven said, "Ah!"

Beast Boy jumped from surpise and said, "Oh my gosh!"

*laughs* I don't know... It was just an example... XD But you know what I mean...

3) Good luck with your writing! :]
123thinkbright chapter 3 . 5/14/2005
this is a GREAT story! i love your taste in couples, you gotta update soon, make the battle rough, and sorta endless, well that it would seem endless, and UPDATE SOON!
SugarDevil chapter 2 . 5/11/2005
It's a great story, I hope you update! Suggestion: use paragraphs, it will make the story a lot more easy to read (is it: a lot easier to read? I'm bad w/ grammer) Anyway, great story, poor Raven. Update!

Lots of love

Kiona Kina's Panda chapter 2 . 1/14/2005
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