|Reviews for Don't Try So Hard|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/10
Gosh you are so good at writting. I love this story and it would be great if you did a second part"
| ExodusAttack85 chapter 1 . 3/28
After reading this way too many times, I just realised that by adding a single world it would've changed so much, when Raven says "just go and save the day", if you'd written "my hero". That would've been so adorable.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2016
Awesome! I love it
| Crossxx chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
very good love the story
| angel-of-darknes chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
I liked it ALOT i think u should write more often :-)
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
| pisceanchic101 chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
| romanceaddict3320 chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
Yah! goodness! and sorta depression... anyways it was great! write more soon. i luv raven and robin. they are both so deep. :)
| janedoe091170 chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
Hmm...another very good, and very insightful one-shot from you. The interaction between Robin and Raven, romance aside, was very realistic and well-written...in fact, the entire plotline was good. I hope to see more of these, they're very thought inspiring.
| animeroxz chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
I love it and it was so sweet keep up the good work
| BlackShield chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
Eh. Not much to say here. Reminded me of Angry. Seemed somewhat predictable in plot, but can't be helped with this particular plotline. I can't help but think I've seen it somewhere before. Meh. Probably making it up. The irks nag me, but I'll leave them out of the review.
gr8 job!11 i luvd ti!11
| Sinistra250 chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
I love it, I love it, I love it!
| ravendarkraven chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
as amazing as always. your fanfictions never fail to impress me. it was totally in character, and as a fellow Raven/Robin shipper, i'm adding this to my favorites now.
Anyway, John, you deserve all the praise you get. You're an excellent writer and get better with each fanfic you write.
| vinnie the geek chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
Good story. I think you did a good job of keeping in character. Carry on... VIn, the ancient
| Dangerproneredhead chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
I really liked this story! Found it easy to read and very...real (I think is the word).
Great dialogue progression. *nodnod*
Erm, you know that I'm not one for much words.
Good job, hope to see more like this soon.