Reviews for Winning The Love Of The Handsome Skater
Alexandrea Romanzesco chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
i have a feeling this is gonn abe better than the first one.

alex
Kataan chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
heya

COOL CHAPTER well i thing it was the same as last time i read it but i dont quite remember cause it was ages ago. cant wait to read it agian cya
onnimo chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
GOOD JOB UPDATE

MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NE YEAR!

happy your redoing it!
t2i2n2a chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
yes i remember reading this fic, not sure if it was finished or not. glad to have it back... its very interesting especially the way you make bulma being such a rich girl you wouldn't suspect she would be wearing anything but labels.

update soon!
supra89 chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
Very good. I like it. Keep up the good work. Update soon!
MiMschi chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
i really liked the first chapter.. i guess i read the "old" story too and i liked it back than.. im really looking forward to reading this.. its sure to be great!..
AyakaChan chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
oh I like this story! please update soon!
nan de mo chibi otoko chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
it was a good rewrite, but you still have confusing gramaticle errors, like when chichi asked goku to present them to vegeta, you should have said introduce us to your friend. but i still like your style of writing, it makes me pay more attention. good job.

sincerely,

nan de mo chibi otoko

p.s flames should never be accepted, just constructive critisism.
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