|Reviews for Finding a Father|
| PiptheSnake chapter 24 . 10/20/2013
Aww, the ending gave me the warm fuzzies! This was really good, and it made perfect sense!
| Yrinthe chapter 12 . 6/8/2013
I'm really liking this fic, especially the dialogue, it just flows nicely.
| LadyFreak chapter 24 . 1/28/2013
Very angsty, but i think it was very realistic. Theres only so much a person can take in my opinion. Harry was still strong in your storyline, but he wasn't perfect. thanks for sharing :)
| Princessemilymcd chapter 24 . 11/3/2012
I really liked your story and the charms that hid his apearance seemed realistic, they weren't too out of character but i found draco to be a bit cruel. I also didn't liked how he kept almost death all the time. I mean yes he's the boy who lived but its not like he's ak proof or something. Other than that it was a good story, i liked the ending as it wasn't to cliche or anything, gl in writing other fics!
| SlytherinSoul14 chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
This was unexpected
| Danielle Salvatore chapter 24 . 7/23/2011
Just finished reading the whole story. One word: AMAZING.
First off, the general plot was awesome. I liked how you had both Snape and Harry wary and kind of upset about the news of them being father and son for a while at the beginning. A lot of authors who write these types of stories have at least one of them totally accept the idea, and I think it's OOC for both of them.
I mean, the two spent years hating each other. There is NO way that they would totally be okay with finding out something like this.
So kudos to you for writing both their reactions realistically. ;)
I also liked that it took a while for Harry to finally trust Snape, and let him in. You had Harry, with both his trust issues and slight insecurities totally in character.
And thanks for not totally bashing Dumbledore in this story. A lot of Snape/Harry mentor stories seem to do that. Yes, I did get slightly irritated with him at times in this story, but he was in-character, and you didn't go out of your way to make him an unlikable character. :)
I really liked that you gave Remus a good part in the story, and that he and Snape formed some sort of team in their will to help Harry.
Overall...brilliant story. Probably one of my favorite HP ones.
Sorry for the word splat. I enjoyed this story FAR MORE then I thought I would. Thanks for writing :)
| ArtemisAzkadelliaRika chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
my my you are just as insaine as me
| Darkangel1194 chapter 24 . 5/20/2010
omg love it! the ending was really sweet!
| Bloodgalore chapter 24 . 5/12/2010
This is so sweet. Thank you for this wonderful story and now I'm off back to reality myself... Bye... Bye Snape and Harry and Ginny...
| xDarklightx chapter 24 . 3/6/2010
I love it. It is a get story.
| mworth1019 chapter 24 . 1/21/2010
I liked the story, you did a fine job. nice interaction, nice ideas. thanks
| contract chapter 15 . 11/11/2009
harry gets beatan, harry gets kidnapped , harry gets is your harry so worthless... kill him and be done.
| Kathleen Yuki chapter 24 . 11/9/2009
that was really good. nice job. I'll have to read the story that goes to this, the one where Snape views harry's memories. keep up the good work.
| Ilerre chapter 10 . 4/4/2009
Hi! I love your story! It's so great, and the raltionship between Harry and Snape is so sweet and slow.
Althought, I'm french and I can't help but laugh at your poor translation of "Cacher apparence vrai" for what you probably mean "Hide true appearance" in english. Sorry to say your french is really dreadful and "cacher apparence vrai" means absolutly nothing, lol. I'm not being mean or I'm not trying to ridicule you but internet translator are stupid. If you want you can say "cacher la vrai apparence" but it's still not really idiomatic. So something like "masquer le vrai visage" or better: "masquer la véritable apparence." Anyway, as far as I am in the story, I love it. Great job, and bip me if one day you need help in french. LOL.
| Rori Potter chapter 24 . 3/11/2009
That was great. One of the best Harry Severus relationship I've seen.