I really enjoyed this fanfic and spent the whole night reading it. BRAVO ! It was a great job! The writing is very descriptive and evokes the feelings of the characters beautifully. In fact, I found the characterization to be very faithful to the canon, knowing that this story was written about fifteen years ago. Shippûden was not yet released. Which impresses me a lot considering where you started and the information you had at the time. I particularly liked the romance you built around Sasuke and Sakura. Even though I felt the urge to punch him when he pushed Sakura away during his fight with Orochimaru, as if the first kiss meant nothing. They are perfect together and so cute. I would have loved it if Sasuke had turned out like this with Sakura. I also really enjoyed the Neji/Tenten and Naruto/Hina. At the time, no one knew that Naruto would eventually turn to Hinata. So hats off to you, it's really well constructed. Anyway, all that to say that I really had a good time reading you.

Hahaha. I like the part where Tenten said "Jealous of what...the cat?"

I also love how Neji is insinuating that he wants Tenten to take the place of the cat. Lively story by the way.

Thanks for such an amazing story! If you have more of this share it with us, please. I'm here without a talent at writing like yours. In fact, english it's not even my first language so I'm not even that good at expressing my self in it. Anyway. You did a grate story with this. Wish you the best!

Ive read more that guest's reviews/flames. Nvm what ive said before, this kid needs serious counseling.

And you also dare to insult and degrade the author with profanities and curses, my gosh. Ur parents need serious help in raising you.

To the guest reviewer, ohmygosh, the degree of ur immaturity is out of scale. Im completely disturbed and baffled by ur ehem reviews, which they arent btw. This is just an anime. It's completely unhealthy to hate on a character to that extent, my gosh. Plus this story was written in the early 2000's, shippuden wasnt even out yet. And by briefly reading ur flames, you are mostly refering to scenes that are in late shippuden boruto, like wth? Please, try to grow up. Its really unhealthy.

You are a fucking worthless cunt! How dare you make it so Tsunade takes the sword. She blocks for Naruto. she would never take it for that dirty little traitor. And how typical that at the end you put sasgay and suckura! Plus at the end of the battle, while Hinata is doing the healing, suckura is on her fat ass on a slug! Oh and Katsuyu is a female you worthless fuck. I hope you get teh same treatment Tsunade did. Or that you get into a shit relationship with a creep who tries to kill you and treats you bad! You deserve shit for this shit story! Naruhina is a true pairing. Shikatema is a true pairing. Inosai is a true pairing. Sasgay and suckura salut are not! Get it right you stupid little sakutard! Go fuck yourself or jump off a cliff! And again, fuck you for too much sasgay and suckura slut! Naruhina didn't even have a chance to flourish and they were together even before Neji and Tenslut! How dare you fucking put the 2 weakest sluts in one story and with the 2 men that hate them! You're a fucked up braindead whore!

Fuck you you retard! Suckuwa is NOT better than tsunade and no leader! She's shit at teamwork and is a bitch! No one needs her and if a bandit can slice her so easily then akatsuki will thrash her. Also hinata is a fighter not a medic and she doesn't follow slutura. Hopefully the sword pierced suckura or sasgay!

Fuck off with your sasgay suckura shit. Its a fucked up pairing and doesn't deserve any recognition. Sasgay should be dead! Dirty scum traitor. suckura should be dead too. Useless slut. oh and she's not a prude. She's a dirty little tramp who pervs on cute guys and constantly throws herself at sasgay even though he hates her guts!

My god. You are so conceited to write lying shit like this. Sasgay doesn't laugh and certainly NOT for suckura the annoying cunt! Suckura would NOT be accepted by the uchihscum. In fact they'd be turning in their graves! Suckura is NOT nice looking! fuck you. Get your fucked up lying shit head back on straight cunt! Deluded

More shit about suckura and sasgay! Sick of your lying bullshit! Lee is way better than the traitor! Suckura is a fake! she's not strong or anything! Just fuck off with your shit! Stop making crap up!7

Suckura is nothing like neji. She's still useless and a user. Poor lee is always hurt by that bitch! Stop making a big deal with her and the shit uchiha! Akatsuki will be after Naruto and gaara. NOT sasgay! Gaaras cute. Kid isn't. At 2 she would not be talking! You're so shit!

Fuck off with sasgay and suckura shit. And neji being with the second worst female. Bit more naruhina which is a canon true couple and more with ino. Don't need so much fake shot! Oh and they're CHERRY blossoms! Got that you thick cunt!

Sasgay is NOT the best looking shinobi. Naruto, Lee, Neji, Kiba, Shino, Shikamaru, they are so much better looking than that traitorous scumbag. That kid would NOT have changed from Lee, who is awesome with kids, to a surly uchiha scum! Lee is way better! Suckura whoreuno is NOT pretty or talented at anything. She will not be a good teacher. She is shit! Only thing she can do is healing which quite frankly is nothing, since many others can do it too! Stop making such a big deal out of those 2. they are shit main characters! They're totally overrated! Yuo got it right that that bitch wouldn't notice Lee leaving. She's a selfish fucked up slut like that! Lee can do so much better since quite frankly, while suckura the worthless bitch ends up with sasgay the freak, their life is shit as he's always off on missions and always shunning her and blowing her off. she's a single mum. So get ti fucking right you useless sakutard trash! She IS an awful person. She's a nasty manipulative bitch! She loves to hurt people. She cares for a bruise on sasgay when Lee is clearly distressed. Pathetic slut! She couldn't get rid of sake in Lee's body or anyone's for that matter. She has no rights to forgive him for something so petty. While sasgay hurts everyone around them. She's a pathetic nobody and I'm sick of her shitty waste of ink character! Sasgay should have been killed! Suckura should be alone! Like they both deserve! You're a fucked up tard who puts suckrua too high when she's not! Hinata is way better than suckrua the cunt!

There is NO sasusaku you demented bitch! Suckura has not earned ANY right to demand things! She is NOTHING! Just like you!