|Reviews for Falling in Love|
| pbow chapter 8 . 5/26/2011
Great story so far.
The research that I did a few years ago said that they weren't sure how long naked mole rats live in the wild but one kept in captivity lived for 27 years. If you've found other research, I'd like to see it.
| BlackStar-F chapter 12 . 9/13/2007
OMG this story is awesome!
| The Wise Duck chapter 12 . 10/27/2006
Very good job ghosting off of a couple of episodes. The concept is cool and I liked the way you handled the interaction in the first half dozen chapters. The later chapters (from ‘pirates’ on) seemed rushed and somewhat incomplete. More time could have been spent fleshing out their pasts (Kim’s) or figuring out their present (Ron monkey transformation) as well as just more personal interaction on both sides (more info on Scarz and her history/relationship as Drakken’s sister please!)
Other than that, very enjoyable.
The Wise Duck
| fieryfalcon chapter 7 . 12/28/2005
100 dollars a day only works out to 36,500 per year. Good for a school teacher, not much for an international assassin turn bodyguard. Good story though.
| zipporahvulcan chapter 3 . 11/16/2005
Hi,I'm enjoying the story and looking forward to reading the other chapters. I like the way you've captured the characters of the older Kim and Ron and the banter back and forth. They seem as comfortable in this AU as if they'd known each other since childhood.
Just wanted to point out that several times in this chapter, "fallow" is used where "follow" should be used. A field lies fallow for a year to regain fertility. A person follows their heart.
| spectre666 chapter 12 . 7/31/2005
Very good. Just one problem, it begs, demands a continuing series. I sincerely hope you'll consider it.
| Kid Eternity chapter 11 . 7/1/2005
I hope nothing bad happens to Wade, besides I'm waiting for the next chapter.
| Impossiblegirl chapter 12 . 6/8/2005
I loved your story! It was very cool to see what KP and Ron's relationship would haev been like had they not met in Pre-K and not become best friends. All of the scenes were good (I mean chapters); it was fun to see all of the old characters again in a new scene.
| Backroads chapter 12 . 5/9/2005
I'm a horrible person! *bawls* I can't believe I ignored this for so long! It's such a great little AU idea, but it's so distinctly.. Kim Possible! I love the ending, with the involvement of the GJ. Great job!
| Hakudoushi007 chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
Love is in the air
| warprince2000 chapter 12 . 4/22/2005
Very cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story you write (update soon Plz)
| alicialipsky chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
Love this story Forlong i'm getting execited about when mine comes. Oh and thanks again for your link.
| Ukari-chan chapter 11 . 4/8/2005
This story is really interesting! I really hope to read more of it soon!
| wildste chapter 11 . 4/7/2005
Dude, that chapter was really cool. It could have been slightly better. Bit more description on the seperate house etc. But great over all.
| warprince2000 chapter 11 . 4/5/2005
Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz)