|Reviews for Falling in Love|
| GargoyleSama chapter 8 . 3/1/2005
Looks like there is something blooming between the two of them. Will be interseting to see what happens in the next chapter. How injured is Ron? How recovered is he from his encounter with the Moneky Power?
| BOC42 chapter 7 . 2/16/2005
Ooh! New updates! Um...your fight scene sounded good to me. I have the same problem myself with those. They're just a ton easier to watch and imagine than to actually write. Good job. I'm really liking the cliffhanger. Wonder what's happening to poor Ron... good job!
| captainkodak1 chapter 7 . 2/16/2005
Don't dread fight scenes, you did a good job with it. Kim standing up for what she said she was going to do. Ron now has the monkey power. They could be quite a team. I am sure their relationship will grow now even more. This is a very nice tale in a different perspective. Please keep it up.
| warprince2000 chapter 7 . 2/15/2005
Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz)
| MtnRon chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
I am enjoying this story.
| eckles chapter 6 . 2/2/2005
Good chapter :-)
| Geor-sama chapter 6 . 2/2/2005
An update! Good chapter, slightly startling how much it mirrors the actual episode...but then its still entertaining. You've done a good job, and I'm anxious to see how things turn out for Kim and Ron...and to see if ShadowFox really will die now that she's gotten the Jade Statue.
| GargoyleSama chapter 6 . 2/2/2005
Continuingly(is that a word) compelling story line. And even not being best buds forever Ron saves Kim's life. Of course nothing some of us wouldn't do far almost any red head.
The 16th? Guess I will have to wait.
| Geor-sama chapter 5 . 1/25/2005
I'm sorry my friend, I should have read and reviewd your stuff ages ago. You've got talent, and several interesting stories.
I won't mention the Fallow/Follow question (I can't help but chuckle at how that sounds)mainly cause those small questions don't detract enough from the story...
Anyway, good job. Keep it up and I'll be watching. :D
| BOC42 chapter 5 . 1/24/2005
This is getting really good...I'm waiting for updates. Keep it up! :)
| Intrepidwarriors chapter 1 . 1/13/2005
Awesome story. Just one hint, some of your spelling is quite unusual. eg do you mean follow instead of fallow? wasn't sure. and just instead of jest? i was wondering if it had to do with the way the characters spoke or a personal writing fettish you have :) hope my comments doesn't offend. you're a great writer.
| eckles chapter 4 . 1/12/2005
Kim was a Gun-for-Hire called Shadow Fox? Hm, 'Gun-For-Hire', isn't that a nice way of just saying Mercenary? As a International Reporter, I wonder what kind of 'nice' things Ron had heard about 'Shadow Fox' in his travels, and I wonder what kind of bearing it will have on the development of the relationship between him and 'KP'.
| GargoyleSama chapter 4 . 1/12/2005
Another excellent chapter. It's nice to know that some things remain the same. Ron going on the babble when nervous and using I'm going to shut up now was classic. The ending needs to have the dum-dum-dum-dum sound for dramatic effect, hard to do that in a text system I know. :)
| GargoyleSama chapter 3 . 1/5/2005
This is getting very good and interesting. The twelth is a long ways a way to wait.
| captainkodak1 chapter 3 . 1/5/2005
This is getting good. What did Kim do before that Fiske would want her as a bodyguard. Does Fiske know that Ron is an ex-cop. Getting interesting. Hope Fiske does not have anything over Kim. Looking forward to next chapter.