Mione? Herms? what's up with the nicknames? ;D

and you have to wear Hogwarts robes while at the school.

just trying to help. :)

*Pie to the izzle*

Yeah... her ability is that she can read minds. Duh.

Too bad if it's like, a totally different ability and I'm just dumb.

Yeah.

~SP

Come on girl! When you gonna update! If you start a story you gotta stick with it! E-mail me cause I have an idea for a story and I need your help with a title! K?

Nice. Very nice. But you did point out that Ron has a sister. Who is really awesome. You MUST include my Ginny. She is awesome.

hm interesting i think claire may have something special about her...ya know...lol

~lily-evans07

LOL!

I like your story-it's SO funny and really good. Your wrong; it not boring at all. I think it was really funny how Chris sassed Malfoy: absolutely hilarious. Keep writing!...Please?

Ha-ha! In the words of Ron, that was bloody brilliant. I love how she sassed Malfoy. And you, miss person who can't spell diamond right, listne to the CD I gave you. It is very happy and has the song about the truffle on it. I love George Harrison! Ha-ha!

well, i couldn't find the hint, lol. avril's last name is lavigne :P this was a good start, but too much description will have people telling you she's a mary sue; i know, it's stupid, but there are nutters out there who just love flaming. [mary sue is a perfect oc character who is too good to be true] so if you hint at it, people will assume. the dialogue was realistic, which is great! but remember each new speaker starts on a new paragraph, but i saw that you started doing that, just not at the start. overall, good start to your first fanfic!

That was very good you really make me want to read more, and find out what Chris's "secret" is! All I can say is to check for punctuation errors and make sure that they don't interrupt with the "flow" of the story. Other than that this seems like an original and very well thought out story, UPDATE SOON! P.S. I'm adding you to my author alert list so it will be easier to find your story : )! P.S.S. Are those the bands you like or just the characters'? Because if they are then you like EVERY band that I like!