|Reviews for The Christmas Gift|
| Government Man chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
Hello. I was directed here by the author's friend on , Korishimo. I'm just gonna copy and paste my thoughts from there...
I thought it was very well written. The writer used complete sentences, indented, and was pretty good spelling wise, too.
Story wise, it was brilliant. That's all I can think to say...
| thekatgrl chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
aw... how sweet. I really liked the banter in the beginning, it made me laugh. Merry Christmas to you too!
| ADnAMa chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
This is very sweet... Riku is my favorite character from KH, and I have been looking for a capturing SaRR fic. Beautiful work, keep writing. Made my heart melt.
| RESCUExMe chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
omg! that was so kawaii! i love it!
| Evil Pancake chapter 1 . 12/28/2004
This just wants me to say one thing: Aw. x3
| Reina-183 chapter 1 . 12/28/2004
One word: Cute!
That was so incredibly sweet! _
| Zelphie chapter 1 . 12/28/2004
*purrs* So cute! *giggles* It was really adorable knowing that Riku was so horny near the beginning.. XD
Good one shot. - I hardly ever review anymore to stories I read...but this one was so cute! -
| squalmasy chapter 1 . 12/28/2004
How adorable! You will certainly receive more reviews when people begin to come back to this KH section.
This is so cyute! I love your writing. Some people have a great talent for shonen ai fluff and you, my friend, are one of them. One suggestion I make is to add commas to add to the readers' understanding of the story, but thats seriously a minor suggestion since I just can't find anything else wrong with it! Tee hee.
Wonderful! I'll continue to read your work.
Love always and muchly,