Reviews for The Rohan Pride Chronicles, Part I: Alone
Guest chapter 49 . 5/26
Are you fucking kidding me. Can the poor girl catch a break? Jeeze

I do love the story though
Pineapple3000 chapter 58 . 3/22
I ah... meant to post a joke in one of the previous chapters cuz Boromir said his quote and it reminded me...

How many gondorians does it take to change a lightbulb?
Gondor has no lightbulbs. Gondor needs no lightbulbs.
Pineapple3000 chapter 47 . 3/22
Katherine chapter 71 . 7/14/2014
I stayed up both last night and Saturday night so I could read this wonderful fic. I enjoyed it the whole way through, and you are truly a talented talented writer! Did you really start writing this in sixth grade? Your writing is very good. I cried during parts of this fic. I have to go read the sequel now...I can't wait for the reunion! :D
Aerhyce chapter 52 . 4/16/2014
The Ring.
OF COURSE it was going to be the Ring.
And a woman that cares for her children (biological or not, it does not matter) would do anything for them.
Aerhyce chapter 51 . 4/16/2014
Damn, this story is so friggin' hardcore that I can't even list any trauma Gúthwyn DIDN'T experience.
KissMyDeadLips chapter 71 . 3/18/2014
Background music Amazing detail fight scene and dialogue Teary eyes and review
KissMyDeadLips chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
Still Love this Horrible, Intense, Heart-Breaking, Blood-Curling, Want to Kick that Elve's Ass, and Slap Guthwyn in The Face Moment. You my one of my favourite writers that are the rare ones :D
TheConqueress chapter 71 . 2/9/2013
Yay! My first fanfiction I ever finished
I love this. Honestly, I usually end up reading stories about tortured people that are really bad quality and because of such quality, I end up losing interest when something non-angsty is happening. I love such stories, which is ironic considering my traumatic past :p You kept my attention and your writing talent is amazing. For goodness' sake, you're making me procrastinate my own writing so I could read yours! I will now move on to your sequel
Also, again, in this chapter she says the kids are dead again and then she'll save then ._.
TheConqueress chapter 70 . 2/9/2013
Almost done, but a question in this chapter: who does she mean by "them" in "you killed them?"
Does she mean Beregil and Borogor or the children? Because it sounds like the children but she keeps saying how he'll kill them if he returns
Jenga-Tree chapter 71 . 2/6/2013
I Love your Story. I have been reading non stop just so i can find out what happens next. At first i found it had to get into the story because i find it hard to read stories where little kids are the main character. But i kept reading because i wanted to see how it progressed. I also find it believable the the Man who kidnapped her was not sorry that her took her. For the kind of people who take people and not usually sorry that they have taken someone. I Really appreciated that even tho she was with the fellowship for so long she was not immediately every ones best friend or in love with one of the men. i could keep going about all the points that i like about how realistic your story is. If it was not for the fact that it is a fictional story. Well done! now i am off to start reading the second book.
TheConqueress chapter 56 . 2/2/2013
Yay fellowship! Two questions bugging me:
What did Borogor whisper to Beregil? What was the significance of Hammel's sentimental goodbye to Borogor?
TheConqueress chapter 50 . 1/31/2013
Yes! I've been waiting for a battle-hardened Gúthwyn for so long! I do like Hammel and Haiweth but I have to be honest and say I feel they really tie her down and I hope they don't remain main characters forever
TheConqueress chapter 49 . 1/31/2013
I have to review before I continue
I absolutely love the format of this chapter. You magnificently created a state of mind for the reader so I share Gúrhwyn's experience of a busy mind. Overall your way of writing is so amazing, I wish I could emulate it just as well for the novel I am working on. One can only hope
TheConqueress chapter 7 . 1/9/2013
I don't usually review as I'm working on reading an entirety of a story, but I absolutely love your final sentence
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