Reviews for The Rohan Pride Chronicles, Part I: Alone
Anatone chapter 43 . 1/7/2009
dude this is great but slightly depressing.

one thing: you've titled two consecutive chapters as "36" so now your chapters aren't correct
Anatone chapter 42 . 1/7/2009
bah! fie on Haldor! ten thousand curses on that dude. he isn't even worthy to be an Elf. i hatest him.
Anatone chapter 41 . 1/7/2009
good chapter. this is a great story, and you have amazing talent
Anatone chapter 40 . 1/7/2009
bleaugh. how disgusting.

great chapter, though.

you spelt "meet" when you wanted to say meat"
Anatone chapter 39 . 1/7/2009
Anatone chapter 38 . 1/7/2009
oh GREAT chapter!
Anatone chapter 37 . 1/7/2009
it would have been an interesting turn of events is Guthwyn had been pregnant.
Anatone chapter 36 . 1/7/2009
what a horrible birthday...sigh
Anatone chapter 35 . 1/7/2009
hum...interesting. :$

well, great job, didn't notice any mistakes
Anatone chapter 34 . 1/7/2009
very very good. i liked this chapter, though it hasn't been my favorite since she came to Mordor. oddly enough, i liked the one where Borogor had to clean her back after he knifed her. I have no idea why, but it's probably because of my sick and twisted mind.

you used the wrong form of your/you're twice, but other than that it was perfect
Anatone chapter 33 . 1/7/2009
god i love this story. it's so cool!
Anatone chapter 32 . 1/7/2009
uh oh. she's gonna get mad at Borogor. that's not very nice. lol

great writing, but i don't like the subject very well. haha
Anatone chapter 31 . 1/7/2009
me loved it! only one mistake.

"They said that I was servicing you… as woman" should say as a woman
Anatone chapter 29 . 1/7/2009
dude that sounds freaking painful.

lovely chapter
Anatone chapter 28 . 1/7/2009
dude. if i was her i'd be killing myself, but there were the children to think about too...hmm.

excellent writing as always
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