Reviews for The Rohan Pride Chronicles, Part I: Alone
Anatone chapter 48 . 1/7/2009
uh oh, i will now hate Faramir forever, he killed Borongor. actually this was a great chapter, and i still like Faramir a whole bunch.
Anatone chapter 47 . 1/7/2009
NUH UH! no killing of Borogor allowed. If that's Faramir of Boromir, I will hate him forever, even though i really like both of them.

great chapter, btw
Anatone chapter 46 . 1/7/2009
dude, if they don't get together by the end of this series, i will kill you! haha, just kidding. i love you too much for writing this to kill you.
Anatone chapter 44 . 1/7/2009
very sad...poor dudes
Anatone chapter 43 . 1/7/2009
dude this is great but slightly depressing.

one thing: you've titled two consecutive chapters as "36" so now your chapters aren't correct
Anatone chapter 42 . 1/7/2009
bah! fie on Haldor! ten thousand curses on that dude. he isn't even worthy to be an Elf. i hatest him.
Anatone chapter 41 . 1/7/2009
good chapter. this is a great story, and you have amazing talent
Anatone chapter 40 . 1/7/2009
bleaugh. how disgusting.

great chapter, though.

you spelt "meet" when you wanted to say meat"
Anatone chapter 39 . 1/7/2009
Anatone chapter 38 . 1/7/2009
oh GREAT chapter!
Anatone chapter 37 . 1/7/2009
it would have been an interesting turn of events is Guthwyn had been pregnant.
Anatone chapter 36 . 1/7/2009
what a horrible birthday...sigh
Anatone chapter 35 . 1/7/2009
hum...interesting. :$

well, great job, didn't notice any mistakes
Anatone chapter 34 . 1/7/2009
very very good. i liked this chapter, though it hasn't been my favorite since she came to Mordor. oddly enough, i liked the one where Borogor had to clean her back after he knifed her. I have no idea why, but it's probably because of my sick and twisted mind.

you used the wrong form of your/you're twice, but other than that it was perfect
Anatone chapter 33 . 1/7/2009
god i love this story. it's so cool!
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