|Reviews for Grandiose|
| VazeStream chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
hahahhahahhahahhahahah*falls of chair*hahahha so funny!
| Orenda chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
I actually read this during Christmas break, but I was with Becky at the time, and I kind of forgot to write a review afterwards...
This looks like it would have been very fun to write - a bit time consuming looking up all the words, but worth it nonetheless. I especially loved Goku's love confession, it was so hilarious!
I promise I'll read PW eventually, but in the meantime, I loved this one.
| YJ chapter 1 . 1/11/2005
I simply adored this fanfic...
..No words 2 express...
| Revlofantasy chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
Haha, this fic cracked me up! I like the "Relinquish the toast!" line _ I hope to read more from you in the future!
| SangoGoddess05 chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
XD That's the funniest saiyuki fanfic I've ever read! XD
| tangerine-asuka chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
this is so funny! goku speaking erm... strange language in my opinion. i can't imagine that! But what exactly did he say to sanzo that night? i couldn't even make out half the words...
| Zymz-Sensei chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
Wha..hahahahaha! D! This is the best! Next thing you'll know Goku and Homura reciting poetry!
| SibylSofiana chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
HAHAHAHA! What a way to go! Really loved this, it was so funny! (Hmm. Now I'm tempted to look up all those words in my thesaurus).
| don't have one chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
This was the funniest thing I've read all month. Dear lord, I can see it all happening. Thanks for writing this!
| NekoMegami-chan chapter 1 . 12/31/2004
*dies laughing* OMG! Hands down the best Saiyuki fic I've read in six months! I just LOVED it! Very funny, well written. Thanks!
| Karot lazy lazy chapter 1 . 12/31/2004
I laughed like a frickin' maniac - oh so often a thesaurus has been misused, but never in such an adorable manner. The childish brain is like a sponge, and one with Goku's determination has the power to encompass...well, a great many reference books. And the conversations between Sanzo and Homura were rather debilitatingly hilarious.
One *big* discrepancy, though. Um. *grin* I believe when you used the word "pommel" you meant "pummel"...see, pummeling is beating, but the pommel is that bit on the saddle of a horse that you hold onto if you don't have any reins. If I remember correctly. Anyway, barring a mistake of my own, it's...not the word you were going for. XD Ironic in this piece, huh?
| Jeshika chapter 1 . 12/31/2004
that... was just *beautiful* i am now, more than ever, a devoted fan. XD
'relinquish the toast!' bwhaha...
| WingLancir chapter 1 . 12/31/2004
Oh. My. God.
Coherency fails me. I literally fell out of my chair laughing, and attracted very strange looks from other people present.
(I fear to confess I understand most of what Goku said, XD)
AND HOMURA. AHAHAHAHAHAA~
| TinyGhost02 chapter 1 . 12/31/2004
It's so funny! I luv it!
| kitsune-oni cant be bothered to log in chapter 1 . 12/31/2004
Great story! I couldnt understang Goku myself half the time, and ended up looking words in the dictionary.
The phalanges thing... was he asking Gojyo to pass him the knife?