|Reviews for Prince's punishment|
| WillowTree100 chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
I dont find this story very realistic. I think that after thefirst spanking that laharl would then just use overlord's wrath or somthing like that and beat the crap out of Etna. He is way stronger than her.
| unknown chapter 5 . 10/18/2009
the prince desires that spanking
| gfg chapter 5 . 6/26/2009
you have a sick mind
| Me and Me chapter 5 . 3/15/2006
Eheh,nice story with a sweet ending...
At first I thought "WTF?", cause I didnt know ANY of the characters (let alone the series/game). I just kinda stumbled over your story... (but I dont regret it :D).
Really funny! _
PS: I didnt know you could fall asleep over someones lap! O.o
| Qwiz chapter 5 . 1/4/2006
| Lacto3.1415 chapter 5 . 12/11/2005
Aw! That was such a cheesy ending!
Pichu: *takes out a bucket of cheese*
NOT THAT KIND!
Anyways, I look forward to the sequel and any other fics of yours:D
| Bella chapter 5 . 12/10/2005
Yes, it does work. It's very sweet, actually. I do wonder about what age demons are considered adults, though, since two years doesn't really make a dent when Laharl is 1313 years old...that's about the only thing I could nitpick, though.
Good luck with your future writing endeavours!
| The Purple Penguin chapter 5 . 12/10/2005
(Too lazy to log in, sorry) X3 I love it! *does happy dance* I would be very honored to cowrite with you / Nice ending (horrid pun, sorry XD)
| Shigure 147 chapter 5 . 12/10/2005
Great ending. And you have to make a sequewell or at least another fic like this. You must you must you must. I will send you Richard Cox's aoutograph. So I will see you in my next review.
| Bella chapter 4 . 12/7/2005
That was really sweet, actually. Everyone was in character, I figure dealing with feeling love isn't easy for demons. The bit about angels enjoying getting spanked made me laugh...and gave me some hilarious mental images involving Lamington...anyway, I'm looking forward to the comclusion, I adore Laharl/Etna and hope she makes him call her Queen!
| Shigure 147 chapter 4 . 12/3/2005
Ah very good chapter well worth the wait, Now what was this about a challenge, I want to take it. I ready for. You cant stop me. So talk to you soon Shigure
| The Purple Penguin chapter 4 . 12/3/2005
ZOMG! I loved this chapter If you want, we can cowrite a sequel...PM me if you like the idea :3
| Maru-sha chapter 4 . 12/3/2005
Simply awesome ! I say you should leave the story as it is, this is a perfect ending to me. Hm, what's this challenge of yours, anyway ? I'm busy with loads of others things, but if it's do-able then I'll try it !
| Shigure 147 chapter 3 . 11/28/2005
Hi just wanted to say I'm sending your Miroku's Va atougraph. You should get it by tommro. I see you like Maru-sha works. Well Im writng a Serenity fic with her permishion of corse called age switch. I'll tell you whentit is up and I hope you will check it. In the next chapter I would like him Lahar to talk to Flonne about it forst but would get know where with the love freak as you put it and would go talk to Etna about it. So bye Shigure
| Kyuuseishu Setsuna chapter 3 . 11/28/2005
Yeah, I think the fic is starting to cross the boundary of the T rating. It might have to go to Mature after reading some of it, though it started as an innocent punishment for all Laharl has done.
Honestly, this is probably the most original fic I've ever seen. It's so different from all the others while still keeping everyone in character (though Laharl is weakened...but there's reasoning behind that of course). Still, I think another character (possibly Flonne) should get in on the action. Perhaps driven by jealousy or feeling Etna is taking the punishments a lil too harshly...or maybe even join in herself. It's your fic though, so go with what you're planning. I'm sure it'll be great.