Reviews for Written In The Stars |
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![]() ![]() That is sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw how romantic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWW! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwh that was so cute... loved it.. love, TJP |
![]() ![]() Very Sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() at first it sounded like she was talking 2 harry 4 the 1st 2 sntences, then it sounded like she was taking 2 ron, then u makit sound like harry again, from this: "But-but, oh, Ron, I'm so worried about him! He doesn't talk about his feelings with ANYone. It's not healthy, keeping everything locked up inside like that. I mean, he didn't tell even US what went on the- the night of the third task. It frustrates me. I want to help him, to know what's bothering him, but he won't let me.", then in the next sentence, u make it sound like ron again, then i thought it was malfoy, then it sounded like ron. MAKE UP UR MIND U CRAZY PERSON! |
![]() ![]() that was cute! "So this is a first for both of us." "Right." "So we both don't know what to do and are completely nurves?" lol _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm...did you know that there's a website dedicated to R/Hr called Ron and Hermione:Written in the Stars? You should proofread a little better; I found some minor typos here and there. Not bad, overall. |
![]() ![]() IT! *In a high sqeaky voice* |
![]() ![]() that was cute. the last part was completly cheesy but thats okay |
![]() ![]() ![]() This . . . I think this is how it would happen. Yes. _ Very nice. (Hey, this new pairing search engine is great! Now I don't have to week through 10000 fics to get the Ron/Hermione ones!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so awesome! I loved it! Most people don't do a very good job describing kisses, but you did really well! I liked the stars part at the end. Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwwww that's so sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! ::hugs Aria:: Ahem . . . yeah. Sorry. I'm a rabid Ron/Hermione shipper, and this was just so well written . . . it was EXCELLENT! (::sigh:: I am a girl of few adjectives . . .) Anyway . . . goodness, what more to say? It was . . . too good for words, I suppose. Yeah. And I hope that the next chapter of 'Aftermath and Awakenings' will be up soon. Ciao. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was a bit fluffy, but what better way to write a romance? how sweet. I am falling in love with your stories. |