|Reviews for Jaybird|
| Impressed person chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
Dude you're a flippin amazing writer. Seriously, this might be short but it's really really well written.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2016
This is one of my favorite winry and Ed fanfacs. You did a great job.
| ink7blot chapter 1 . 10/3/2015
As soon as you said that, I thought about it. Then I rewatched a few episodes. Then thought some more. Then, after reading the part of 'the two phenomena', I decided to hit the favorite button.
| Sokka-Mushroom chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
This just makes me want to squeal like a little girl. I can't even describe how adorable this is. Nope. Just can't do it. Too cute. Too funny. Ahsjdkcksndcm
| Aleria14 chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Haha I never actually thought about those points you made in the last AN, but now that I think about it, it's so true! Great fic, really enjoyed it :) you employed a really unique style of writing that you don't really see around the FMA fandom and that (along with the very original and generally amazing idea) made me appreciate it more! Awesome job! :D
| Nefer-T chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Makes perfect sense to me!
...Ah, damn it. I have nothing interesting to say other than I really really liked it. xD
| RedWingedAngel002 chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Aww.. xD But lawls!
| Evil Little Dog chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
This is just a delight to read. And reread. And enjoy and giggle at.
Thank you for sharing it.
| BornOnTheBreakOfDawn chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
omg...i truly love your works...i've been laughing so much while i was reading this story! but if you've already seen fma brotherhood, there's that one time ed was bathing in the military base...this story sort of reminded me of that scene (although it wasn't ed and winry related) but that part was really epic, a lot of people will never forget what happened then. :P
| Eriisu-April chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
i got a really good laugh at this. thanks for that xD
| Musafreen chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Short be damned indeed...XD Winry must have enjoyed walking in o him like that; I'm pretty sure I would.
Amusing, entertaining and just plain brilliant. Hats off to you.
"in case he had taken it into his head to try bathing in the middle of the living room rug" 8D
| goldacharmed chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Omg THIS IS SO FREAKIN FUNNY! I loved it, and your note at the end, it's so freakin true! Only once do we see that he bathes at all, and it's at Winry's house. And she did walk in on him! lol, great job!
| laughingst chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
| Orange Singer chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
This story is love. I love the part about battle plans being drawn. fricken' hilarious.
| ishmaranara chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
A good bit of craziness it is...