|Reviews for Jaybird|
| Sokka-Mushroom chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
This just makes me want to squeal like a little girl. I can't even describe how adorable this is. Nope. Just can't do it. Too cute. Too funny. Ahsjdkcksndcm
| Aleria14 chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Haha I never actually thought about those points you made in the last AN, but now that I think about it, it's so true! Great fic, really enjoyed it :) you employed a really unique style of writing that you don't really see around the FMA fandom and that (along with the very original and generally amazing idea) made me appreciate it more! Awesome job! :D
| Nefer-T chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Makes perfect sense to me!
...Ah, damn it. I have nothing interesting to say other than I really really liked it. xD
| RedWingedAngel002 chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Aww.. xD But lawls!
| S J Smith-Evil Little Dog chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
This is just a delight to read. And reread. And enjoy and giggle at.
Thank you for sharing it.
| BornOnTheBreakOfDawn chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
omg...i truly love your works...i've been laughing so much while i was reading this story! but if you've already seen fma brotherhood, there's that one time ed was bathing in the military base...this story sort of reminded me of that scene (although it wasn't ed and winry related) but that part was really epic, a lot of people will never forget what happened then. :P
| Eriisu-April chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
i got a really good laugh at this. thanks for that xD
| Musafreen chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Short be damned indeed...XD Winry must have enjoyed walking in o him like that; I'm pretty sure I would.
Amusing, entertaining and just plain brilliant. Hats off to you.
"in case he had taken it into his head to try bathing in the middle of the living room rug" 8D
| goldacharmed chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Omg THIS IS SO FREAKIN FUNNY! I loved it, and your note at the end, it's so freakin true! Only once do we see that he bathes at all, and it's at Winry's house. And she did walk in on him! lol, great job!
| laughingst chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
| Orange Singer chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
This story is love. I love the part about battle plans being drawn. fricken' hilarious.
| ishmaranara chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
A good bit of craziness it is...
| ignitesthestars chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
Oh, fantastic. Hee, I can't stop giggling. Thank you for writing something so cute!
| AstonishedOwl chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
I love you so much for this, because, while rewatching some earlier episodes and wondering how it was humanly possible for a 13-whatever to be so buff, I was scoffing at Ed's pretty blue shorts.
NOW I KNOW WHY.
Luffs the complete awkwardness of the EdWin here, because that is HOW IT SHOULD BE. (I'll stop yelling. Eventually.)
Faved, because it's just that awesome. (Long reviews are long.)
| JigokuHana chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
LOL! I crack up everytime I think of Winry's hand randomly waving in the doorframe 0 Poor Ed just can't get a break...but if I were in Win's position, I'd be doing this on purpose as well as taking pictures. XD *drool*naked ed*drool*