Reviews for Twas the Night
Soul spirit chapter 1 . 7/28/2017
I have to admit, this is pretty funny. I'm a complete and total sucker for yaoi, so of course I'd love this.
Momo Brigham chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
I like it very cute, and a bit funny XD
Ayano-chan chapter 1 . 1/27/2015
That was cute! ;) you are a pretty good writer and OMG THAT WAS HILARIOUS! WHITE ON RICE HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
Pat, pat. It's okay. I'm pretty sure we're all poor, obsessed fans. I know I am.
TooLazyToSignIn chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
For a first try, it wasn't nearly as bad as you think it was. I'll say the Lime scene was a little on the corny/cliche side, but nothing bad. Leaving most of the ending portion of that small section, what seemed to be a purposeful forgetfulness on Roy's part in your writing, is actually good. Makes the readers guessing, and filling in the blanks with their own deliciously evil and gutter-minded porn.
But just for future reference, Lime is what you would refer to that scene as. A Lemon scene would usually be classified as full-penetration sex, while lime seems to cover everything before:kissing, groping, frottage, fingering, hand/blowjobs, and other similar acts. Hope that helps!
Aneko Phantom chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
Even if this is like on 4/14 and not close to chrismas (XD LOL) I like it.
Z. U chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
I think it was good, even if a little wierd.
NewMoxxie chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
that's your first story?

man i feel twas good :) (yeah...corny...)
Lis chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
Excellent fanfic :)

You have a great writing style that draws the reader in, and isn't repetitive and boring. Well done :)
Twang-Man chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Pretty good stuff.. sensitive and yet hot too... there is something terribly bittersweet about wanting someone and not knowing how they will respond, and you caught it perfectly.

Roy x Ed fan chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
I was drinking lemonade during the lemon part.


I loved it, and I think the Lemon part wasn't bad at all. It was amazing. *applauds*

IOTR chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Drunk!Ed ish adorable :3
nukagirl chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
Lol! That was good, eggnog doesn't mix well with Ed then?
foxy crimefighta chapter 1 . 1/23/2007
hell of a lot better than MY first fanfic. ;;

I really liked it, twas lovely.
Ysarose chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
Not bad. Twas fun to read. Thankies!
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