Reviews for Twas the Night
Soul spirit chapter 1 . 7/28/2017
I have to admit, this is pretty funny. I'm a complete and total sucker for yaoi, so of course I'd love this.
Momo Brigham chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
I like it very cute, and a bit funny XD
Ayano-chan chapter 1 . 1/27/2015
That was cute! ;) you are a pretty good writer and OMG THAT WAS HILARIOUS! WHITE ON RICE HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
Pat, pat. It's okay. I'm pretty sure we're all poor, obsessed fans. I know I am.
TooLazyToSignIn chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
For a first try, it wasn't nearly as bad as you think it was. I'll say the Lime scene was a little on the corny/cliche side, but nothing bad. Leaving most of the ending portion of that small section, what seemed to be a purposeful forgetfulness on Roy's part in your writing, is actually good. Makes the readers guessing, and filling in the blanks with their own deliciously evil and gutter-minded porn.
But just for future reference, Lime is what you would refer to that scene as. A Lemon scene would usually be classified as full-penetration sex, while lime seems to cover everything before:kissing, groping, frottage, fingering, hand/blowjobs, and other similar acts. Hope that helps!
Aneko Phantom chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
Even if this is like on 4/14 and not close to chrismas (XD LOL) I like it.
Z. U chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
I think it was good, even if a little wierd.
NewMoxxie chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
that's your first story?

man i feel incompetent...it twas good :) (yeah...corny...)
Lis chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
Excellent fanfic :)

You have a great writing style that draws the reader in, and isn't repetitive and boring. Well done :)
Twang-Man chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Pretty good stuff.. sensitive and yet hot too... there is something terribly bittersweet about wanting someone and not knowing how they will respond, and you caught it perfectly.

Mike
Roy x Ed fan chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
I was drinking lemonade during the lemon part.

BRAVO!

I loved it, and I think the Lemon part wasn't bad at all. It was amazing. *applauds*

:3
IOTR chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Drunk!Ed ish adorable :3
nukagirl chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
Lol! That was good, eggnog doesn't mix well with Ed then?
foxy crimefighta chapter 1 . 1/23/2007
hell of a lot better than MY first fanfic. ;;

I really liked it, twas lovely.
Ysarose chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
Not bad. Twas fun to read. Thankies!
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