Reviews for Possession
Keithbear666 chapter 38 . 2/17
You somnabitch, you can't leave it at that. I LOVE MC's that are wild like this. The fact you turned Inuyasha into this already has my full attention. Add in a relationship and full on world around Inuyasha in said state? You now have my full attention and a very strong love for your story so far. Do you realize how long I've looked and waited to find a story that had an MC like this? Way too much and way too long. People seem to LOATH the idea of an MC that was raised in the woods and so wild that they are more animal than person. More PRIMAL, than sophistication. I LOVE the idea of an mc being that primal and having to learn how to survive a sophisticated world, WITHOUT losing that primal state. The silent primal mc is something I just haven't seen any trace of at all in any story. And those that get close to it ruin it by literally turning them into a tuxedo wearing gentleman in a couple chapters. They don't know how to savor having a primal mc that doesn't use words to communicate, doesn't use false words and thoughts, doesn't need to TALK needlessly over crap that could be fixed with a simple punch to the face. And that's if you don't just ignore them because they like to prattle on with useless vocal cord usage. I've kinda devolved to repeated statements at the end there, sorry about that. But I'm serious, I've spent years actually wanting a story with a primal mc that doesn't talk unnecessarily, and ultimately Acts like they actually LIVED in the WILDS since childhood. you know, raised in an environment where the only living thing is stuff that CAN'T TALK THE HUMAN TONGUE. And as such the human wouldn't know how to speak it either.
Keithbear666 chapter 32 . 2/17
Inuyasha is the merged demons, that's his darkness and what he is dealing with. Kagome is midoriko during the battle, that's her darkness. I don't know exactly how you are going about it, but you are recreating the shikon jewel through them. The darkness they are facing is the fused demons that were fighting midoriko, literally. Now those demons need a vessel that is connected to the shikon jewel I'm assuming. With Inuyasha and kagome being as connected to the jewel and that time period as they are, they are the MOST important to the situation. And somehow someway they both are connected to midoriko and the fused demons because of Inuyasha's transformation into a full demon being triggered by her word activating the prayer beads. This is my thoughts with what has been revealed so far. I could be right, or I could be wrong. But I'll at least say this with 100% certainty, I'm loving this.
Citlalli chapter 38 . 8/18/2024
Loved the history. I hope someday you finish it
Guest chapter 38 . 3/29/2023
Please it's been almost 10 years, please update this
Please come back chapter 1 . 2/9/2023
Writing another year in hopes that you'll return and grace up with a grand finale to this amazing story. I haven't given up in hoping I'll come and see an updated date. I hope you've been well.
Guest chapter 38 . 5/29/2022
Please update soon. This story needs an ending story
alannalove1990 chapter 2 . 5/9/2022
Gahhhh I’m so confused
alannalove1990 chapter 1 . 5/8/2022
Hummmmm
Crystay chapter 38 . 3/23/2022
I’ve been engaged since the beginning. Such an interesting ’s to hoping this story will be completed!
AmSkye08 chapter 38 . 2/2/2022
Oh my heart hurts knowing this story will never be completed. I hope, but It's far fetched. Best fic I have ever read. Tears me apart I will never know the ending.
Countdraculoh chapter 1 . 12/22/2021
The way that I would sell my souls to have this updated omg
darkandcurvee chapter 30 . 6/11/2021
They both are so fucking stubborn
Guest chapter 9 . 6/8/2021
T.T u have made me cry.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/8/2021
Urg, I'm so upset T.T
Guest chapter 36 . 5/17/2021
I know this is an old fic and will never be finished (or maybe it will idk) and I absolutely love it. Your writing is absolutely phenomenal like I really hope you've gone on to publish original novels by now. I love the twist that it wasn't *actually* Inuyasha's "dark side* causing his original actions, but a demon possessed. Beautiful.

As a writer myself, I'm crap at leaving reviews because they tend to be without substance and just kind of like. Demanding? Like GIVE ME MORE with no commentary on the actual material which can be flattering, sure, but like what.

Either way, this is/will always be one for the ages. And I know that Inuyasha isn't a thing anymore (Shit, it's been over a decade), but I would be pleasantly surprised if this continued to the end.

You were/are very talented, and I was very young when I first began to read this, but now that I'm older: I can truly appreciate Kagome's character development, above all.

Hope you're doing well and that you never lose your passion for good writing, because you're damn good at it.
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