Reviews for Possession
Silent Bloody Tears chapter 3 . 1/3/2005
OH my this is really really good please continue!
apie chapter 3 . 1/3/2005
o! what happens next? :)
AngelAnita chapter 3 . 1/3/2005
Inu Yasha is seriously a bastard...and I never thought I'd say this, but...I hate him in this fanfic. I don't know if you will ever make him change some how, but for now, I hate him. He is horrible, and Kagome doesn't deserve these things.

Kagome, on the other hand, you have changed a 's like...kinda sluttish and kinda not. I can't imagine her normally being so cold. Maybe sometime in the story she will change? I don't know, but you have made her character different, and yet "good", if that makes any sense. She isn't really hated, but she isn't really loved. Its weird, but I like it.

The only suggestion I can think of is that you have shorter paragraphs. In every longer paragraph (which is most of your paragraphs) I see at a few places which could seperate the larger paragraphs into 2 or 3 smaller paragraphs. It would be easier for us to read.

Once again, it is only a suggestion, and I do not mean to sound like a flamer, because I love your story.

Please continue writing it!

persephone05 chapter 3 . 1/3/2005

need another chapter! need another chapter!


i am lovin' this fic!1

keep going please!
Malfoy's Kitten chapter 3 . 1/3/2005
OMG! This story is fuckin brilliant! this is truly one of the greatest Inuyasha fanficitons on this site! And trust me I've read most of the good ones...

But I have to know...are Kagome and Inuyasha gonna somehow come together again make up or is this gonna have a horrid ending where everyone hates each other? Please write more, i'm dying to know what happens!
The Angel of Chaos chapter 3 . 1/3/2005
Wow, this is a very touching story. I hope you will continue soon. This is very good and you are a great writer.
K.M chapter 3 . 1/3/2005
PLEASE! date SOON! I want 2 c wut happens next! THANX! _
Soechido Ekayco Haru chapter 3 . 1/3/2005
sprinda chapter 3 . 1/3/2005
poor kagome. I like it. please keep it up.
Sapphire Sphinx chapter 3 . 1/3/2005
I love it.
AngelCat HellFire chapter 3 . 1/3/2005

damn, that's so sad ;_;

plz update soon!
W. Huntress chapter 3 . 1/3/2005
I totally hated Inuyasha this chapter. hope that you update soon _!
ANIMEGAL310 chapter 3 . 1/3/2005
' It was just a bad dream, just a nightmare. There was no kitsune to bravely sacrifice himself, there was no hanyou to be driven insane by a corrupt jewel of power. There had never been a monk or a demon slayer to have their lives ended too short. There was no priestess who was weak and diseased by longing and doubt. There was no rosary, there was no jewel. There was no Kagome anymore. Only a dark void that called her in a voice seductive as a golden eyed glance, irresistable as a demon's hot kisses on her skin. '

sniff...sniff...This is a work of art i have to admit. the way you fully describe the pain and torment Kagome is going through captures the reader truelly into it. its like rider a roller coaster. you build suspens till it reaches the topp and then it stops. you leave it hangin'. it truely is awe inspiring and i wish to know who inspired you so to wirte this.

inuyasha, destroyer of souls and bdies... i am truly afraid now and if it was night iwould be haing nightmares. he is a liar and a killer. an emotionless shell with a heart of coal that makes the reader scared beyound mind. it makes the reader feel as if they were actualy there watching Kagome suffer and those around her.

Shippo...her friend...her little brother...her adopted child. sacrificing himself so that his mother may live is something truly amazing. i am so touched and crying...this is full of emotions that get the reader hooked for life and thinking how blessed they air that their relationship is nothing like that. it makes one think about the world today in how some women are allowing men to use them and are too afraid to stand up for themselves like Kagome did.

i applaude you...i congrate you on this pic of art.

He took my body and he took my soul,

he took my childhod, my herat and mind.

he took my son and he took my life,

leaving a shell of emptiness and regret.

he destroyed my body, tore it in two,

he took my heart and turned it to dust.

he has made me this...


a poem by Kagome to inuyasha
Runemeister chapter 3 . 1/3/2005
Wah! So depressing. You're doing a good job here but I think that you should take a break from this and go back to Youkai and Daimyo. The readers need a chance to recover.
Sintar chapter 3 . 1/3/2005
WHOA, I guess that's all I can say is whoa! I absolutely love this story, you are soo talented!
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