|Reviews for Daughters of the Unnatural|
| claire-loves-music chapter 2 . 2/6/2012
"To kill it, attack the giant flower bulb at the top of its body." why did i think of a giant bulbasaur? lol
| Ollie912 chapter 6 . 1/29/2011
Great Chapter :D
| David Fishwick chapter 6 . 1/16/2009
Nice and I hope you are going to write more thanks.
| azerjaban chapter 6 . 12/22/2008
"I love all of you remember that. I’m sorry I have to leave you like this. I will see you in five years."
I'm sorry but how creepy is that to know your going to birth something in 5 years that will die in 20?
Hopefully all my reviews puts you back in the writing mojo(I find reading my entire story helps get me back in the mood). If not I can take this last chapter lie the ending.
Thanks for writing.
| azerjaban chapter 5 . 12/22/2008
Why haven't you killed off Abby yet? lol
Glad they found out- plus u had a bit more D/C in this one.
1. does Abby not get that if she kills her parents she Seizes to exist?
2. How come they are not trying to find a way to send her back to the future?
| azerjaban chapter 4 . 12/22/2008
So Abby's officially crazy. I like how you had Angel suddenly rooting for Dawn/Connor, speaking of...
WHERE'S THE D/C ACTION?
I know D.J is your main character but I feel like ALL the focus is on her and none on how D/C fall for each other. Just a little flirting.
Hope it gets better in the next chapter.
| azerjaban chapter 3 . 12/22/2008
Some really good lines in this one that had me cracking up-
“I’m not sure.” She paused. “But if you even think about doing that memory-mind wipe thing, I will have to sink you to the bottom of the ocean.”
“It would be too awkward. Especially for mom and dad. I mean, how would you feel if some teenager popped out of nowhere and said, ‘Hi mom. Hi dad.’?”
The names are a bit weird though, not D.J but Abby.
| azerjaban chapter 2 . 12/22/2008
Another very nice chapter!
You seriously don't have enough reviews so here I am telling you I loved the Dawn/Connor interaction and think that Abby should die soon.
Unto chapter 3!
| azerjaban chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
“Do you think we can trust her? I mean, remember the last time a teenager popped out of nowhere to here?”
lol, VERY nice first chapter. On to the second!
| Socratic Irony chapter 6 . 4/13/2008
Wow, this story was an emotional rollercoaster!
Please update soon, I know you put this on hiatus and I don't mean to sound pushy but you have something really AMAZING her. Please continue it!
| newyork423 chapter 6 . 2/3/2008
| cc chapter 6 . 7/11/2007
you suck monkey butt. you have to continue this story. i will attack.
| Laurie Jupiter chapter 6 . 8/11/2006
You are a very evil person for not updating chapter seven! Your story is pretty good - with the exception of Abby (I'm starting to hate the little brat). Keep going and don't stop now!
| WillowLuver chapter 6 . 7/28/2006
I absoulty hate you! I'm only kidding of course, i love this story, i've read it like 5 times, but i need the next chapter! Are you working on the next chapter or not? I really want to read the next chapter, i've been checking back like every week, but still no new one.
Please work on the next one!
Okay, i loved all of the story i believe that the only thing that you could change, would give us some more Donnor action, eg, Talking.
| rosie chapter 6 . 4/23/2005
i love this story so much plz update soon!11