|Reviews for Midnight|
| Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
| Nelras chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
Poem! *sits down to chew on it*
Doesn't surprise me to find this, though. :) Your other stuff that I read was poetic enough, so it seemed a bit inevitable.
| Switchblade237 chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
Hauntingly beautiful. I love the italicized portions - they add an almost chant-like quality reminiscent of a prayer, as well as a poetic rhythm. The imagery is amazing as well - I love the phrase "midnight on the moon" - and the motif of darkness in light is rather profound. Well done!
| brick-red-wall chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
that was very good. You are very good at capturing emotions... or so i have noticed. Great job! ]
| macaday me a nut chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
Wow. That holds so much. I think its sweet and sad at the same time. Can that happen?
Macaday me nut(and your one too!)
| RT chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
| Reaka chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
(clap clap) Excellent story! I loved it! Great job!
| Pointed Teeth chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
I guess she got into his head after all, not just under his skin.
Its like reading a broken little poem, emotions wrapped into words. Sort of like reaching for a feeling that you know is there but just out of reach.
That's what your writing does, it touches the void.
| Larna Mandrea chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
*glares at you*
It's almost not fair you have so much talent.
Kidding, of course, merely envious (and with reason!).
The only thing I can think of to say is that thank Hogwarts you've written so much; I'd go insane otherwise.
| duj chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
At midnight the moon still reflects the sun's light,
The bright side, the white side that hides darkest night,
One face to the shadow, one face to our sky,
A space face, a grace face - but which one is I?
| IndiaInk chapter 1 . 12/31/2004
once again, excellent! I can relate to that self-delusion thing; that's my main battle. Anyway, great work and thanks for reading my story!
| Shadowface chapter 1 . 12/31/2004
The last line was beautiful, Write more stuff soon!
| Chimalmaht chapter 1 . 12/31/2004
That was dark. And slightly depressing. Good though. I liked it.