Reviews for The Lonely Hearts
Update chapter 8 . 5/16/2013
I enjoy the story, please update
MimoriFanForever chapter 1 . 3/4/2007
I love the mimori and ryuho pairing and the kazuma and kanami paring so i love this story. _ I also loved the flash backs i havent watched it in a long time (i did finish the show though)and the flash backs helped remind me i can't wait to read more well im gonna now bi
DragonBreath101 chapter 8 . 11/2/2006
that was such a good story! Please Update soon!
robopuppy chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
this is actually a cool story butit looks like you gave up on it. Did u? u can email me back
s-cyr-ed fanatic chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
I read your fanfiction over the summer and I couldnt stop until I finished pleaase finish I've cheaked back every week since then and nothings happened singed a crushed fan
s-cry-ed lover 123 chapter 8 . 8/11/2006
ever since s-cry-ed ended I was kinda dissapointed nothin happend between mimori and ryuho this is so sad I hope 2 lovers met again they are ment 2 be. i have been adicted to this story since chapter 1 please update soon sign desprite reader
TheEvilAshleyness chapter 8 . 8/9/2006
u need to update!
Serenity05 chapter 8 . 7/8/2006
Omg you so have to let her escape! Don't let her get caught and be locked up in that freakishly weird place! In the end that official person Yasuho Ryushou needs to die a painful death! How could he lie to Mimoru and say Ryuho tried to kill her! That a$$hole! Like Ryuho would ever do something like that! Ryuho so needs to kill that guy! Something needs to click in Mimoru's mind bringing back all the memories of her and Ryuho cuz it's not gonna be a good thing if she sees him again and thinks he's gonna try and kill her... I mean poor Ryuho the woman he loves is gonna think he's trying to kill her.. *tear, tear* Oh and nice touch with the whole Mimoru reaching for the Crystal! Old habits die hard I guess.

And poor Kanami..! Kazuma is such a baka! All this time and he's never thought of where his feeling for her really stand? What a baka! And calling her a 'burden' was probably the biggest mistake he'll ever make in his life no matter if he meant it or not. Never say things you don't mean is a lesson he's gonna have to learn the hard way. And the whole getting angry upon seeing her run into Asuka's arms thing, really is retarded. I mean she said she wanted to be more than just a little sister to him but that's all he sees her as, he practically took her heart and stomped on it right then an there. And him getting angry over just seeing her with Asuka who happens to be going to see his GIRLFRIEND should really tell him he doesn't just care for her as a little sister.. gosh he's really the biggest baka known to man.. it's so surprising he's actually an alter user.

Also Asuka better hurry back. With Kazuma having his own business to attend to it's gonna be hard for Ryuho to find his beloved Mimoru before he has an emotional break down of his own and hits the point of insanity. Asuka's also a baka for leaving at a time like this. I mean yea his girlfriend's in the hospital and I'm sure he loves her more than anything but he can't just leave when they have no clue where Mimoru is or if she's even alive.. I mean HE most of all should be there searching for her, HE was suppose to make sure she was safe and that she couldn't hurt herself but HE failed.. and now he leaves? Alright so cammy's in the hospital and she fainted.. but at least he knows she somewhere safe! Unlike Mimoru! He hasn't the smallest clue as to if she's alive or not and he just leaves! Maybe I'm just being unreasonable or something? But I still think he should have stayed until they had some clue that she was alive or even a clue that she was.. dead.

So yea now that I got all my thoughts out you really have to update soon! Please please please! I love this story! I didn't just write all this for my health ya know! You're last update was 1-20-06 so surely yea have had enough time to write and type the next chapter so get to it! But, no pressure.. lol.
dongwoooppa chapter 8 . 7/7/2006
! You SHould UPDATE! Let Her Escape And Have A Tear-Jearking Reunion!
inkk chapter 8 . 6/28/2006
Update soon! I love this story...

But.

Let Mimori escape! _
jeremiah carter chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
i thought the story was great and i cant wait for the next chapter
Laney 916 chapter 8 . 4/30/2006
great story. i love it! also, in the series, Kanami is 8 yrs old. lol. -Amanda-
The Story Necromancer chapter 8 . 3/20/2006
let her go and nice job with Kanami im loving it NOW CONTINUE THE STORY
lil kagome 15 chapter 8 . 2/27/2006
You have to let her escape! And she can find her way to the mainland and find Kanami and then they will have to come back and find Kazuma and Ryuho! lol I ramble a lot. And you know what, your right about the age I beleive. That's what bandai had up, but Wikipedia had ten... Stupid huh? I think they've got serious problems... Although it makes me very sad to see Kanami leave again, I must say that this chapter was AWSOME! lol, luv ya, ttfn. UPDATE SOON!

-lil_kagome-
fantasy88 chapter 8 . 2/24/2006
I think that the govenment mainland project is a little confusing, and with all the stuff going on,with Mimori and Cammy and Kanami and everyone else it just adds more... i don't know the word, but anyways I LOVE your fic so far it is totally awesome! Keep writing
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