Reviews for Control
jessi chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Great story!
goldacharmed chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
Aww, such a sweet and sad little story. I really enjoyed it.
MysteryLady-Tx chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
poor Al that was kinda sad...but w/a promising ending...though still sad...LOL...if that makes any kind of sense...

Tangled in the Supernatural chapter 1 . 4/3/2007
cute, this is adorable, I love stories form Al's pov... good job...
mb chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
Aww... that's so sad. I liked that it was from Al's perspective and that he describes the change in Ed.

Again, thanks for sharing!

velfire chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
Ahh I was just thinking something along these lines yesterday. But of course, you put it in much better words than I ever could.
Kiwee chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
That was just too sad! Why them...? *bawls*
Trinity Infinity chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
Nice work on it...Good Alphonse point of view. Though I do think that as a one could stand to be a bit longer. I loved it though..all in all... a 8 out of 10

-Glowing Slyme
Ceirwy chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
:D Great stuff!
Henrika chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
Good look into Al's character. Keep writing!
daisuki-hieiXXX chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
that was very realistic! i can totally see Al thinking like that. you and your story are awesome!
Heika chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
While the series goes into some detail about the interactions between Al and his elder brother, I like how you actually have him notice the fact that Edward feels incredibly guilty about what happens, and feels helpless in return. (A psychologist's worse nightmare, perhaps?)

You've got Alphonse pretty much nailed down, and such lines as "We are two damaged souls but make a complete person together" sounds exactly like something he would say, and I congratulate you on that.

Considering that you have no beta-reader, this fic is mostly grammatically correct. There are a few mistakes that are usually hard to catch (complIment instead of complEment as a word of praise, for example.) Still, it's fairly minor stuff in the end.

Good stuff, and if you would, keep the stories coming!