|Reviews for Second Chances|
| stinker chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
How are they going to work things out when AJ is in Leavenworth? Does the term "fraternization"ring a bell? As this is Mac's second affair with her commanding officer, her career would be flushed down the toilet also! Your story was written ok, but it wasn't very realistic. I know it's fan fiction, but IMO, certain realities have to be maintained for the story to work.
P.S.: Mac/AJ makes me gag!
| Pat Porep chapter 1 . 12/23/2006
I really like this story. It might have had some interesting twists if it had really happened. Excellent! Do better proofreading. Grammar needs some work.
| WraithF-14 chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
Good story, its just don't you think AJ and Mac being together would be kind weird? I mean he is kinda old. But otherwise story was cool.
Rock on wit your bad self!
| joanoa chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
okay, i'm not an AJ/Mac fan. But this was well written. Good Job.
| starryeyes10 chapter 1 . 1/2/2005