|Reviews for It's A Wonderful LifeOr is it?|
| ILoveTea chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Sweet. Maybe sweeter if I read it in the holiday season. FYI now is the middle of March. Do you have anything for spring?
| Sweet.Mione.Potter chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
That was a great ffc,it was really sweet:) You really did a great job with this story it was amazing :)
| bloodymary2 chapter 1 . 2/4/2005
Okay. Good rendition of 'It's a wonderful life'. Maybe it was a little too mushy, but this isn't real life, no need being sad in the end.
Your english has improved a lot. Just two or three typos I could spot and barely no misplaced words. The characters are well defined and more 'in character' than your firsts stories.
Keep writing, specially MPJR ( there will never be enough of those )!
| NG chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
It was a wonderful, adorable, piece of work. You could just as well have turned it into a longer story with a couple of chapters. The only problem that I have is maybe at the end where they were quick to admit their feelings for each other, but on the other hand it might just be a personal preferrence on my side.
Further than that I have no complaints.
Oh and I loved the scene of Mr Parker in a tube full with beautiful girls.
| suspensewriter chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
Loved it. It was so beautiful!