|Reviews for Vice City The Time of Your Life|
| 3Alexandra3 chapter 2 . 6/22/2005
this is a really good start hope you continue with it
| ichangedmyname chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
This is ok. Doesn't really grab the attention, there's nothing much going on besides introducing characters. It's well-written enough, so im sure it'll get better when you get going.
| Sadistic Fox chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
Wow, this first chapter was... amazing!
It's very dark and.. noirish.
I keep imagining Max Payne's voice narrating everything that's happening
Maybe not, but anyways great job. Can't wait for more.
| Imaginariet chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
Ooh, I like! When I started reading this and noticed it was another action-themed story (yes, I know that sounds stupid considering the game I speak of, but I'm a romantic at heart, haha) I have to admit I was a little set back. But as I read through the first couple paragraphs I *really* got into it. You have a great skill for detail and dialoque, and you don't over-do either... something I have yet to accomplish. VERY well done, I can't wait to read more of it. Update soon!