Well, I don't even know you're still using this account, but if you are, I want you know that your fic is icredible and I really like it. I'm not stupid enough to hope that it would be another chapter, it has been so many years, I know this is abandoned but this is a shame. You've written an original story with a good plot, it does have much more to show us. It could have been much longer so, just to make you know and, maybe, MAYBE, make you continue writing this fic.

NOOOOO!
Please don't leave it here!
I need to know what happens next!
This is so good and amazing and well written and I absolutely love it!
I really hope you come back to it!

Hello! So I came across your fic by pure chance, and boy am I happy I did. It's great, seriously, one of the best ones out there. You create an unsettling feeling in the later chapters, which ties in very nicely with Ed feeling unsettled in his new world. You've also created quite a complex plot, with many elements that you had to build on (e.g. who drank polyjuice and acted as Ginny, the Hohenheim link, Ed's amnesia, how it all links with HP) and you manage to retain a lot of mystery about Edward at the same timed, while not totally focusing on him. ALSO, I just LOVE how Ed comes to Hogwarts as a librarian! So original, and way better than all the other introduction-of-Ed ideas in fic. It's pretty awesome. It would be fab if you continued with it! Though I totally get when life gets in the way, it's happened to me too and I've left a few fic by the digital wayside. Anyways, I hope you get this review and know that you've inspired someone with your writing all these years later :) have a good eve

Great story . Sad that I believe it was abandoned.
Great job.

You have managed to write simply a fairly complex plot.
That is something that must be commended. Thank you for the lovely story so far.

Why is it harry is such a nosy little bi*** when ever it's there is a crossover character? Not that I hate that. I do like to see a little retribution.

Please keep writing!

Please update when you can, I'm dying from anticipation.

Updates Please!

OMGGGGG! This is soo amazing! True perfection in a crossover fic (((:

Please update soon!

In a previous chapter (or in Mr. Elric,) it was stated that Edward's false arm had been made of silver, the same that Sickles were made of. Silver oxide, or silver rust, is commonly black or dark brown, not red.

That is the first time I've seen Ed using practical alchemy. Is he still looking for a way home? And if so, how?

I hope that this is not what I call a Dead End story, where things started off really well and then the author just stopped writing. Please tell me you have more in the works for this masterpiece!

Because i'm still somewhat piss*d:

DAMN YOU HARRY POTTER!

I still had some grudge at him!

Ed too nice to not get angry at him! Though he still keep his guard and still clever... #sighed

Was Harry actually told his friends what he saw in Ed's pensive or not?!
If he finally did... DAMN YOU HARRY BLOODY POTTER! YOU MADE ME HATES YOU ENOUGH!

DAMN TO YOU TOO DUMBYDORE!

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How could Ed go home?! How Harry to help him?!

This has been kind'a interesting. Will there be more to it?