|Reviews for Wishes|
| videosrockyolo chapter 13 . 1/6
Very goods story I really enjoyed it can't wait to read the sequel
| lia.a.karas chapter 13 . 2/21/2013
Good story. Off to read the sequel. Keep up the good work. Bye!
| neverest chapter 11 . 12/16/2011
i like the pairing but trying to read this was brain numbing...it's like it was written by the average 6 year old...the imagination is there but you skip details that could add to the overall outcome of the story...i'm not flaming because i do like the over all idea you have for this story however, it needs a bit of re-vamping (as many writers of would say)...as you can tell i don't really use correct punctuation so obviously i'm not criticizing on that...grammar could use work so i'd advise re-reading or getting a beta( don't know if you have one or not as i have yet to read anything else you have written[but i will]) re-reading also helps when writing out your story line or making changes to your stories..i'll read more of what you have written and leave reviews...i'm not making this in review to discourage you from writing in no way, shape, or form just a bit of constructive criticizum
| darkangel0212 chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
keep up the good job
| sorry but chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
i feel like this chapter is missing something... oh yeah! DETAIL
| Kairou Watoshimi chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
| Chidori no Tenshi chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
HAHAHAHAHAH! im sorry; i dont mean to offend u or anything, but the way u said it is just too funny!
| serenity chapter 6 . 8/18/2006
i think kagome should be with both, but like this...
kagoma gets hit after falling barely remembers inuyasha and starts 2 fall 4 shessy all over, then inuyasha comes in and, well u can make up the rest...
looking 4ward 2 the next chapter!
| xXShadowedfateXx chapter 13 . 5/31/2006
Yayness I think I'll put you in my Favorite Authors List and you'll be the first to get there. Oh yeah sorry for the hyperness I've been eating some chocolate chips and usually I never get hyper only when I'm on the computer weird.:-)
| Cartoon Shakespeare chapter 13 . 2/19/2006
i loved it wonderful job!
| funnyfan chapter 12 . 2/19/2006
I love the story, and look forward to the sequel! YAY! *rushes to get sequel*
| wolfking chapter 13 . 2/18/2006
how ever wrote this is very good at writing storys but you must finish the last chapter other then that it is very good
| kaginufan4ever chapter 12 . 2/15/2006
| kaginufan4ever chapter 9 . 2/14/2006
| loveaswellashateforever chapter 13 . 1/22/2006
ah I cant believe you ended it like that, Aww man, now i gotta read the sequeal as soon as possible, it is soo good so out