Reviews for Our Last Breath Together
0RamblingRose0 chapter 1 . 2/16/2005
that was a stunning peice of work. Usually I'm testy about stories use mostly verbal dialog but in this case too much non-verbal dialog would have ruined it.

If this wasn't meant to be a one-shot, you should definately consider continuing it.
xNewxJerseyxBiatchx chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
Woah...intense! You really should write more chapters...
hermoine04 chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
thats sad...i dont care he's a werewolf! i luv him anyways