Reviews for Taking away the spark
BrilliantSerendipity chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
Awesome fanfic! I love it. It was very well written. Please update soon!
smile1 chapter 1 . 1/8/2005

This was a good story, especially considering the fact that I don't like Marissa and all. Fairly well written, try making the descriptions fit in more with the rest of your writing, though. It's hard, I know, especially the clothing, but you did a pretty good job on it so just ignore my comment. I liked all of the drama of the story, it worked very well. I think you should continue if you want and let me know when you update 'cause I don't check that often.

Bye, smile :-)
AbercromB chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
good story.. update soon )
newportbabe44 chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
Aww, :( Nice job though, came together nicely w/ the begingin part w/ the dresses and at the end. Um...make more is all I can say.