Reviews for One In The Morning
I-Love-Trunks1 chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
That was so sad. Poor Kouichi, and poor Kouji. I love this story. Could you please continue writing it?
dnofsunshine chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
I-I... *sobs* c-c-can't think... *sobs some more*




I feel like jumping out a window... SO MUCH ANGST!
janette chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
not bad if you intend to continue the story. if not, what was the point of it.
Saurie Kiryu chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
what a very sad story...i like stories with drama parts and such things like this...byt the way, if you don't mind my corrections...kouji's stepmother's correct spelling is 'satomi'

i'm just uncomfortable when it comes to grammar checks...but over all, it's great! keep up the good work!
angeltear74 chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
you should of made more chapters instead of finishing.
toppyoushimonai7 chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
victoria chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
PLEASE make another chapter! i wanna know what happens! roar! .
Souless Sacrifice chapter 1 . 1/12/2007
What happened? What happened to Kouichi-kun!

You sure know how to leave someone in suspense! _ Great story! :D
digiwriter1392 chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
Gwydion chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
I liked it (and it's prequel/sequel which I read afterward) for it's somewhat vagueness. Sometimes things happen, and we can't always know why. Some people may want more explaination, but the fic seems more... realistic without it. It's sad to know that this story is rooted in a real life situation, though. It's been a while since you wrote it, but I do hope things are going better for you and your friend.
Kayhera chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
That was...awfully vague. But quite, quite well done. And I sincerely hope your friend is all right. I just got done reading volume three of Neon Genesis Evangelion manga and Kouichi in this story was just so much like Rei it was just stunning... (if you are unfamiliar with the story/character she's a strange girl who's always expressionless because she doesn't know how to express feelings. And it seemed that until the end Kouichi was quite emotionless; probably from shock).

I think the only reason I read a story like this was because I'm becoming addicted to your writing. It may lead to an unhealthy obsession and wanting to hug Kouichi. O.o And it makes me feel ever more guilty about not updating my story...

Well, it's eleven so I won't say much more here. Continue with your writing skills and hopefully some luck will come by and I'll find your future novel lying on a bookshelf and by chance read it. And I'll be sure to fall in love with it. _ 'Night!
CrazyDreamin chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
Can u add a second chaper or a second part or something?
Phil Good chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
Hey, Gemini. It's me, Kouichi. I finally got around to getting my ass on the internet, and i saw this story. I just want you to know that everything is alright now.

I'm sorry for what I did.
melly chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
I love it! You just need to tell us what the problem is in the next chapter and no beating around the bush. even though i think i already know what it is. Otherwise keep up the good work!

i'm writting a story to but its kinda sad really.
LadyMeko chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
You know someting knda happend to me once,but my friend just wasnt cutting, she was littraly on a cliff contplating on jumping off, wen she called me crying.

i was never so scared in my life.

all i know is that this better not be a one shot, i want to find out what happens. plz.
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