Reviews for Promises Defended
Guitarlover56784 chapter 35 . 11/23
If I remember right, there should have been more to this chapter.. Where they were exhausted and the spe took a lot out of them, and all that. I feel like a paragraph or two just got deleted
fieryfish chapter 28 . 11/14
I don't know if you still read these but thank you so much for writing these stories. As a writer I know how much effort you put into your tales and I just can't express how great an escape these stories have been in such a difficult period in my life. Thank you.
SmartKoala chapter 51 . 9/25
Awesome! Wonderful! Fantastic! Better than SM's series...this would make a great movie series too! Thanks so much for your 6 years of hard work and creativity to give us a truly inspiring series.
tealoverx chapter 51 . 7/15
you are a great writer.
laloudu77 chapter 51 . 7/14
Wow, what a story! I've never read such an excellent fanfiction as yours! Sometimes it was really hard to see where you wanted to drive us to, but that's one of the best story I've ever read! I think that's a pity that I'm going to read the prologue after this epilogue but I'll read it anyway. It's just that I didn't know it existed!
Thanks for this story, and I may also thank the bad translation I first read of your saga, as it fored me to look for the original one and I don't regret it!
laloudu77 chapter 4 . 7/2
You're a relly bad person to have make Hagrid die :-(( I heard about your saga by the French person who translated it, but as it was an awful translation, I was curious to see if it was the translation or the plot in itself. Happily it was the translation! I really love you writting ans the way it could be true in the original plot! But I think it may be a little bit too much concerning darkness and all the deads, especially in this part of the whole saga, as I don't really see where you want to drive us to, but I'll maybe see that later :-)
superpony55 chapter 51 . 5/22
Wow. I didn't comment on the second one - I didn't have time - but this entire series is amazing. What could have been... just... wow. I don't have anything to say. I may come back later and comment on another chapter with a more coherent review, but for now... wow. Off to read the prequel!
VJ Riddle chapter 49 . 4/28
Okay - your Gellert has seriously grown on me. Your verse is amazing, seriously AMAZING and I've probably reread each story at least five times before finally coming to this one, because I simply didn't want the saga to end.

I love this series, your world-building is fantastic, your OCs are as beloved and reviled as canon, and you add a depth to canon characters in an alternate verse that's just amazing. The Marauders as they may have been...

Now for the last few chapters :)
Xiaou Nem chapter 51 . 4/20
Wow, crazy long story that's been eating up my life for some time now. It is a really intriguing concept. It is especially nice to see all the "prophetic" parts. As you hadn't read the last books when you started, you had to invent some concepts and bavkstories. I think you did this extraordinarily well. Thank yoj!
BlackRocks chapter 51 . 4/12
Look Robin4. All I'm saying is that these 4 Promises stories are amazing. You are one EPIC writer. Sirius Black is my fave character and u just portrayed him, well, perfectly. Stay awesome in your writing!
Guest chapter 42 . 3/26
so dietfried just becomes gellert?
Guest chapter 51 . 3/10
Okay this is straight up in of THE best stories I've ever read! When I set out to find a random marauders fic to read on a bored bus ride to uni, I did not expect to discover this gem. I'm so glad I did though because wow I am speechless. Absolutely amazing. Great job, you're insanely talented! I mean, not only is the plot fantastic but the writing is immaculate. I absolutely love it! Thank you for, well, the story- and for keeping me entertained on my journeys to and from uni for the past week or so haha. :) xx
David Fishwick chapter 51 . 2/25
Brilliant idea and thanks for writing as I enjoyed reading this story.
katiek121 chapter 51 . 2/25
This story was awesome! I loved the ending.
maritinkerbell chapter 51 . 2/17
I finally just finished this trilogy (I've been reading it for 3 weeks)! This is a truly epic series, and I love the suspense- I think my favorite moment is when Arabella wakes up in the hospital and starts cursing the poor well-meaning Bill! I also appreciated the revel right near the beginning of the series when we learn that the "Headmaster" is Remus, not Dumbledore. I enjoy how you interweave multiple plot-lines, and I love how you clearly were managing the end-game from the very beginning (I totally called that Charlie had met up with Julia Malfoy! And Dung being under the distance-seeing enchantment, from like the first time it came up way back in PU!). I like how all four of the Marauders developed their own crucial roles in the war, which fit their personalities- James as the natural leader, Peter as the diplomat, Remus as the teacher, and Sirius as the rebel-turned-savior. I think you did a really good job of showing how all four of the developed and matured. I was vaguely disappointed that Snape's arc ended up being rather anti-climactic- what good did him being a spy for years do if he never really betrayed his master (or at least, not in any way that accomplished something that necessitated being a spy)? I think he should have betrayed Voldemort during the attack on Hogwarts (though I understand for overall plot reasons why that didn't happen), or gotten caught passing information about some crucial attack, or tried to stop the Hogsmeade massacre, or at least tried to attack or poison Voldemort or something. Refusing to answer a summons seemed like squandering away his years spent building up his relationship with Voldemort. I feel like you have a great sense of Snape's personality and I really loved seeing his relationship with the Marauders (especially Remus), so I was a bit put-out that more didn't come of him. In any case, you've done a truly remarkable job on the series, and I would love to read any future HP fanfics that you write!
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