Reviews for Promises Defended
leanaunsidhe chapter 2 . 1/8/2005
Great start to the new story! Can't wait for the next chapters.
mon chapter 2 . 1/8/2005
so, Hogsmeade has fallen. nice chapter. waiting for next.
starrynight1013 chapter 2 . 1/7/2005
Wow. That's horrible. I know I shouldn't be surprised because it's Voldemort, but wow, how evil. Your portrayal of Snape is so deep; you really make him a round character and show that he's in this sort of trap where he now has a heart and wants to stop everything but can't for the greater good (even though you can tell it kills him everytime he can't step in). What a horrible position to be in. But it all makes him an incredibly real, dynamic character. Thanks for writing, and I look forward to your next chapter.
skahducky chapter 2 . 1/7/2005
Oh my! That was so sad! I was hoping that the Aurors would come at any moment and stop them, but I guess they can't be everywhere. Anyways, this is a great chapter. Please update soon!
Augusta Almeda chapter 2 . 1/7/2005
I could almost feel the emotions of the

characters, be it sick pleasure, insanity, disgust, or fear. I find your portrayal of Snape to be very interesting, as he's not suddenly Harry-loving nice Snape like some fics make him, but he's not a Voldemort-worshipping monster either. Again, keep up the good work and I'll be along promptly for the next chapter!
Augusta Almeda chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
After reading PU and PR, I was very interested to see the final installment. Your ideas are very well thought out and the stories excellently written. I rather like the parallels to the 'real' Harry Potter world, such as Sirius being in Azkaban under different circumstances and Fudge being an idiot under any circumstances. For this chapter, I got a sense of detatchment, which lended a curious tone to the scene. Sirius's downspiral seems to have happened a bit fast, but I suppose it works in context.
jordan chapter 2 . 1/7/2005
Whoa, that was heavy. But in a good way, good writing. I'm definitely creeped out now. Things are getting critical now... I love it!

Update soon, please.
oobergoober chapter 2 . 1/7/2005
...I think I'm going to have nightmares tonight
physicallynothere chapter 2 . 1/7/2005
dang, that is a DARK chapter. Thats just sick.
Dessi chapter 2 . 1/7/2005
Wow. That was frighteningly good. I was almost there, in Hogsmeade. Terrifying. Wow.

Update soon! Please? With a sugar cube? (Sugar cubes are the best. :D)
Alana chapter 2 . 1/7/2005
OMG ROBIN! I like jumped for joy to see this story up, because I've been reading since the beginning and it just gets better and better. This is such a great start! Hehe. Keep up the good work, chica!
silverwolf8 chapter 2 . 1/7/2005
You had me shuddering all the way through that chapter, it really was a horrific image. A living nightmare, indeed-but it certainly demonstrated how cold and merciless Voldemort and his followers consistently can be.

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I also think the way you've written Snape is excellent; his character has been consistent all the way through. At the same time as getting his character right, the thoughts you've created concerning his own position are chilling.

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Can't wait for the next chapter.
Sleepydaisychick chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
Unbelievable chapter... as a parent, this is by far and away a nightmare scenario and probably the worst one I can imagine. It was well written and terrifying. I'm dying to know what happens after this, and the ramifications that follow.

The only minor quibble I have with it is that no parent took up Voldemort's challenge at the end. Being a mother, I know that if it were my only shot, I'd do it, even if I knew the final result would be my death. My love for my son knows no boundaries; I would stare death in the face for him (or voldemort, in this case).

Otherwise, excellent chapter - amazing suspense and your imagination and the way you paint a portrait with your words never fails to impress. I'll be looking foward to the next one. :-)
peeves3000 chapter 2 . 1/7/2005
Very dark, yet intriguing.

As usual can't wait for the next chappie.
Prongs4 chapter 2 . 1/7/2005
That was a really sad but really well written chapter...please say it was a dream that didn't happen!
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