Reviews for Promises Defended
Christa chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
GREAT start to another intallment to the UnbrokenUniverse. This chapter just had an air of mystery, and deception, and it just leaves the reader to wonder, what's going on? Where's he leaving to? What's he planning to do there?

- Christa

*who can't wait for the next chapter*
Halan chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
Oh yes, let's run away, that always makes things better. *rolls eyes*

Good job on setting the mood for the next chapters, I can only imagine what will occur when people start looking for his whiney self. :)
Jays chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
Nice beginning to the third leg of the Unbroken Trilogy. A nice mysterious swing to it, with so much Forshadowing and a Cliffie at the end! Now the real questions are where is he going and what's going to happen that you forshadowed with the last sentence. Of course, you already know the answer. You're the author! Anyway, i wait anxious for the next chapter!

Sailor Sol chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
*leaves the first review*


It was fantastic! Poor Sirius!
Peachy Papayas chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
Ooh, goody! PD, just like you promised - this totally made my day! Granted, it was just the prologue - but it promises to be good. I love anything that's really introspective, and this was... for Sirius, who is my all-time favorite character.

I can't wait for Chapter 1!
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