|Reviews for It All Falls Down|
| s1lents1lver chapter 6 . 1/11/2007
that was kinda sad, but hey the endding was very sad good job
| imafrog19 chapter 4 . 8/27/2006
oh, i think my favorite one so far! cool how you used a more unusual set of characters, compared to the other fanfics... a tad confusing, of course, but still interesting...
| imafrog19 chapter 3 . 8/27/2006
i...dont get it...
when do these take place? like, before or after the end of the mangas?
"We’re leaving here tonight, together, aren’t we? You’ll come with me, right? Once I find you, once I free you? But I’m cold, so cold now. I can no longer move. That voice, that damn voice, forbids it. He leaves me no choice, has never given me a choice. But that’s okay, my dear.
Because now…it is silent.
| imafrog19 chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
hello...love the idea of your story, or rather, series of stories...and the fact that tehy're all from different points of view..most seem to be from chiaki's end...
well, im off to read the next chap! (this one was incredible, even if short)
| leradny chapter 4 . 10/2/2005
...Holy hell. I read straight through this and I thought all the chapters were fucking excellent, but when I read Sheila's chapter I just... wow...
| immatureandinnocent chapter 4 . 4/26/2005
dialogue, please! but... it's nice though
| Guardian Angel Gabriel chapter 3 . 4/10/2005
That was quite deep. I love what you've done so far. can't wait to read more of this.
| vile ville chapter 3 . 4/5/2005
Finally, a DO category has been made! I've been waiting so frickin long! And, your drabbles being one of the first postings in this new category, was very sweet-o to read. They were an excellent muse for me and I thank you for writing them! Please keep it up!
| Adora Bell Dearheart chapter 3 . 3/25/2005
I still don't get it, who was the narrator?
| Adora Bell Dearheart chapter 2 . 1/30/2005
Only for your enjoyment? thats what u think.
| Jones chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
Nice - I was hoping there would be some Ororon fic hanging around (though I can't seem to find too much of it u_u). Given that there's only one chapter and it's pretty short, I can't really comment too effectively on it ... whether or not these short-chapters will work will depend on how they all look together once the story's done. But I like it, for what that's worth, and I think you could manage it. :)