Reviews for Affectionate Thoughts In A Disturbed Mind
Queen Misazaki chapter 2 . 1/10/2012
I have read and reread this story so many times. The only thing I can say is, it's pure poetry. It's amazing and one of my favorites. I'd add it to favorites but alas, I am monetered, so I cannot. I love this story so much though.
Yugi-Sora13579 chapter 8 . 7/13/2011
Wow, this was an awesome story, I just wish that I found this story sooner.
Kitty-Kat chapter 8 . 6/8/2011
Kat: That...was...AMAZING!

Kitty: Wow, and that's coming from the Yami! Awesome story! It was a great read!

Kat: I LOVE how there wasn't a SINGLE bit of talking, but only Bakura hinting/saying what the said, and answering! And the flow! Oh GOD the flow! You just BLEW my mind! I now have respect for you.

Kitty: WOAH! You must be REALLY amazing to get Kat's respect, very few people have it! Awesome story again! Totally LOVED it!

Ja ne!

Kitty-Kat/ Kiki(Kitty) & Kyomi(Kat)
Queen Misazaki chapter 8 . 5/4/2011
Bakura's inner turmoil and struggle with himself was brilliant. The way he fought with himself on every detail of what Ryou needed, even if it wasn't what he wanted. I loved the way you made Bakura seem like his heart was shut out from love so much that it melted instantly when he found love again. Brilliant!
MelancholyHappiness chapter 8 . 10/31/2010
Cute! I love it, love it, love it!
TexasDreamer01 chapter 8 . 10/15/2010
*chokes on giggles* who knew bakura could be so much fun to eavesdrop on? *wonders if yami knows about yugi's talk*

XD,

brittney
echochaos chapter 8 . 7/23/2010
love your story. it's told just from Bakura's head witch is really cool sounding. i've never read anything like this before. it's awesome
echochaos chapter 5 . 7/22/2010
i love the way you torture bakura. it makes me giggle and smile my own sadistic smirk. great chapter
echochaos chapter 3 . 7/22/2010
T.T it's so sweet. oh my god so sweet. i'm tearing up. love your story. love it
SydneyAustralia chapter 8 . 5/23/2010
seriously, this is my favorite ryou-kura fanfiction. ever. i thought i should letcha know. i have it saved on my internet tabs thingy and i read it like allll the time. well, not ALL the time, but i do read it as much as i read my own fanfics. which is alot.

so, dearie, keep up the good work.
RyouSeiryuu chapter 8 . 1/19/2009
aw! adorable! totally adorable!
Fallin-Alone-Scared-Lost chapter 8 . 6/10/2008
I liked reading this alot. You did a good job.
can i remain anonymous chapter 8 . 12/7/2007
whoa, nice story. I love the way it was set in Bakura's point of view and the wording of the story was great so that there was no direct speaking but you were able to understand the overall idea. Love it. Though I do feel a bit sorry for Ryou's father (NOT! How does someone say no to their son being involved in sweet yaoi hotness?), I'm glad you were able to incorporate all the other characters as well, plus their own relationships without totally losing the main story.

Once again, must say I love the story! Keep writing!
The I chapter 8 . 5/17/2007
I absolutely loved this!

This story is a perfect balance between romance, angst and humor. I found myself swinging from feeling my heart breaking to laughing out loud, within the same minute.

This rather unique writingstyle you use is just amazing, and you use it so well, only writing Bakura's thoughts and still making the reader understand what's going on. It was a bit difficult understanding when he only thought something or when he actually said it out loud, but that's something I can deal with.

I also think you have caught Bakura's character really well, making him a bit of a romantic without loosing his "big bad"-attitude.

You really had me hooked from beginning to end (or would have, if it hadn't been for my mom getting irritated when I never came to eat dinner. I mean, who needs food? I'm reading a good story here). I also liked the side-story about Yami and Yugi. What I didn't like was the small Anzu-bashing tendencies at the arcade, but I'm going to write that off as Bakura's thoughts about her.

So, to summarize: Well done!
cybergoth chapter 8 . 3/10/2007
What a brilliant chapter! I work in telemarketing (not to you and me but in the IT industry and big businesses) and man that was brilliant handling! Evil Dead, one has to love that film. Hope you keep writing this one!
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