|Reviews for Heir of Blood|
| PokeMANS chapter 6 . 22h
"Can't you read my writing?" Harry smirked, "I can tell you what it says, I remember my answers perfectly. Your favorite color is slime green as it reminds you of the swamp hole you grew up in. Your secret ambition is to get laid by someone other than your mother; your greatest achievement to date is not having spawned any offspring; and I believe your birthday is irrelevant, though you wouldn't say no to receiving a muggle vibrator if anyone cared enough to give you a gift."
| rhizz17 chapter 20 . 5/26
| Guest chapter 20 . 4/21
It annoys me that Harry ends up doing the same thing as he did in Cannon, you just changed a few names and made him 'deadly'.
However, it's well written and well thought out, just not my kind of thing. This is where I drop it. Seeya
| Laila2605 chapter 2 . 3/5
Didn't see that one coming. Actually I thought that Bill was placed there by the Goblins, as a way to keep an eye on Harry, since he is the last Potter!
| Guest chapter 20 . 2/5
| missgsmith51 chapter 20 . 1/6
I enjoyed your story. I see you went part way through Harry's fourth year and then stopped. Although you haven't updated since 2012, I hope you plan to finish. Some fics do find a way to end Voldemort in Harry's fourth year, even with the Horcruxes. If you're tired of writing the saga, why not just finish him off in the WIP? Just a thought ...
Thanks for sharing your stories with us.
| missgsmith51 chapter 19 . 1/6
"Hermione's a Gryffindor, that will sometimes override the smart factor." LOL! We know that's true even in canon. Remember she followed Harry and Ron to the failed "midnight duel" in first year, mainly so she could scold them all the way for being out after curfew. Um, hello? So was she, the goofball!
For reasons I'll never understand, she lied about going to find the troll, as well. All she had to do was say she was in the bathroom and the boys came to warn her; then she wouldn't have lost points. After all, people sometimes have to use the facilities, even in the middle of a feast. She didn't have to lie, the dunce!
Your Hermione does not enjoy the benefits of Harry's friendship. In fact, I wonder how many friends she has, other than Ginny. Even Harry, who is one of the three top students in their year, considers her a know-it-all and doesn't really care for her. That one difference alone in her relationships changes how things unroll during the year. It will be interesting to see if this experience brings about a change in the dynamic between her and Harry.
| missgsmith51 chapter 14 . 1/6
I consider Manuel and Trevor very much like I think of Sirius and Remus - not physically slashy but still sharing an uncommonly deep emotional bond of love and devotion built on years of trust and living like family. JM2K.
"For Slytherin we have ... beaters Potter and Zabini, who are incidentally the only non-cheaters on the Slytherin team; and seeker Malfoy, whose daddy bought his way onto the team." Poor Lee. I'll bet McGonagall really bent his ears back over that ... not that it isn't true.
LOL at Hermione the cat!
| missgsmith51 chapter 11 . 1/6
I wish we could see collaboration between Harry and the twins on something besides pranks. I think I've read too many prank-heavy stories lately (most feature Sirius, Remus, Harry, and the twins).
| missgsmith51 chapter 7 . 1/6
"I don't think we want to know what Lockhart wears under his robes." I know I certainly don't! I can't stand that ridiculous popinjay. Really, Dumbledore's choices of DADA teachers, aside from Remus, should see him facing a psychiatric review or charges of criminal negligence ... or both.
It's tough to believe that Lockhart and Quirrell were the only two competent wizards in all of the British Isles who were available to teach DADA those two years. Trevor or Bill would make great teachers, and they would be perfectly placed to watch over Harry and Blaise.
| missgsmith51 chapter 6 . 1/6
"Hermione will have a part to play in this story." Will she be a smart and helpful friend, a super-girl-power witch, a cow-eyed Lockhart girl-fan, or an authority-worshipping, nagging tattletale? I'm always baffled how a smart witch like canon Hermione couldn't see through Lockhart after reading one or two of his books. Worse, after seven years of his insults and laziness, she marries Ron, demonstrating her lack of discernment when it comes to men. I think that's why I generally like fanfic Hermiones better than canon Hermione.
| missgsmith51 chapter 5 . 1/6
Dobby's behavior is odd, to say the least. I didn't realize Lucius wanted Harry kept away from Hogwarts; I thought that was Dobby's own idea to protect Harry. Or is he talking Bout some other master?
Harry's magic must be pretty strong if it overrode House-elf magic. No wonder he's tired. Dumbledore could probably get through his shields pretty easily if he tried right now. Harry should tell Snape what happened, perhaps.
| missgsmith51 chapter 4 . 1/6
"Harry and Blaise ... had to constantly ask Mr. Weasley to stop playing with the buttons so that they didn't attract attention." Major giggle. I can just picture it!
Leave it to Mr. Weasley to screw up an amusement park ride. **Imagining him jumping on the stage to sing with the Bears at the Country Bear Jamboree**
The twins and the mime scene is priceless!
| missgsmith51 chapter 3 . 1/6
I can't stand Lucius. I'm betting that if he follows his plan for the year as usual, Manuel and Trevor will see that he is fitted with a pair of cement booties and dropped into the Marianas Trench ... or perhaps transformed into a Basilisk treat. I do hope they manage to dispense with him at some point.
I wonder if having Bill around will make a difference in whether or not Ginny's problems are discovered early, before disaster ensues. It would be interesting to see what might happen if the Horcrux is discovered early in the game and dealt with by someone who knows what to do.
| missgsmith51 chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
So ... What secrets is Bill harboring? Is he secretly a hit man? Is he one of the old group to which Trevor referred when he spoke to Dumbledore in the infirmary? It will be interesting to learn what his connection is to the Darkovs.