|Reviews for Landfall|
| Big O chapter 3 . 2/15/2007
| Swedish chapter 3 . 9/11/2005
An interesting story, till now;
I simply wanted to add a few corrections for the German parts:
shit, of all that I must deal with.
Scheiße, daß ich mich ausgerechet damit beschäftigen muß! (I have to take care of that, of all things)
We will crush them under our boot heels - Wir werden sie mit unseren Stiefeln zerquetschen! - No heel. Alternative: use 'unter unseren Stiefelabsätzen'
| DreadNot chapter 3 . 1/15/2005
I do hope we'll be seeing more. This is most enjoyable.
| DarkNaty chapter 3 . 1/14/2005
Great Fanfic! Keep it up!
| CallmeDebby chapter 2 . 1/7/2005
Dear God! thank you for such a fanfic! -bows down-
I loved this one,the story line is so well written. I'm aching for more!
Just a few things. I believe Samiel is Zamiel, I'm not fully sure, but that is what was in the manga.
Also I think the sentence:"Her hair drifted in the wind, the one curl defying the wind.." Could be "defying it." or any other concoction that doesn't have to use 'the wind.' I don't mean to nit-pick, it's in my nature ;;
Anywhosit, I lurve this! Keep it up 'kay? ~
| Thess chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
Thank you so much!
I only found a tiny typo: Fraulen is Fräulein. :)
| Vati Kazimir chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
*Looks around, itching for more.* That was great! I must have more! Don't make me go into withdrawl! You can't be evil enough to do that, can you? It was good, though. Keep it up! _~