Reviews for Divine Wrath
Lloyd Irving Aurion chapter 2 . 1/16/2005
You can always count on Adray to go out proclaiming news that some people don't want proclaimed. Though most of this chapter was somewhat unnecessary, seeing as Nel is NOT being OOC; it was still quite good. I hope that we can look forward to Nel and Fayt's reunion next chapter. Update soon. Thanks
Pipp chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
Woah...Good chappie! Update soon!
Fury Cutter chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
An intresting start. Can't wait to see what happens next. Peace.
Z.A.G chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
Oi.. good job mate. I"ll Try to give a better review next chapter but it's midnight now and this good fella needs to hit the sack.
deathknight sora chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
Holy shit is it hard to find a NelxFayt fic!

Very Good kee[ it up
Peril chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
Lengthy notes indeed... I believe we all have to take certain "artistic" licenses when it comes to fanfic, since the existence of a piece in itself is already breaking canon. Anyway, it's hard to say much from one chapter, especially one as description oriented and short-ish as this one, but the setting seems promising enough. Looking forward to the next chap.
Jamie chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
This is a good fanfiction...please keep up the good work. I love the FaytNel of my favorites! Lookin' forward to next chapt!
Kei-kun chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
I think everything is just fine. Keep up the good work. Hope to see an update soon.
Daedulas chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
I noticed that the chapter title was one of Nel's moves...It'll be interesting to see how that plays a role later on.

The story was really good, but my only gripe will be how long it takes to update :P
Lloyd Irving Aurion chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
The first thing I want to say is, good job. I also agree with you that the towns/plains should be expanded. As for your personification of Nel, you did excellent for the situation you placed her in. Had this Nel been placed in the game, she would be too...extreme. But given the effect of surrounding and situation she is perfect. I cannot, however, completely agree with what you said about Fayt. To me, he seems like the type who would not be able to readjust to a simple life. He would have to have the danger. Nor does he seem like the type to be able to say a permanent goodbye. So I think his end-game actions are understandable. Thanks
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