|Reviews for This New World|
| novellamal04 chapter 1 . 9/14/2016
i thought they were 12. Nonetheless, thsi was a very cute ending!
| Natalia-Chan chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
Awwwwww... I loved it!
| Lmb111514 chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
This was sweet, I liked it.
| person101 chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
wow you are and amazing writer! Great job.
| Annie chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
| Jenn chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
very, very, cute. :D
| KeepMiAlive chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
aw...i really like it. it's adorable!
| EmBeR chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
This is such an amazing ending I always thought that Doon and Lina should show each other that they are in love by sharing a romantic kiss! Very, Very good ending to a wonderful book!
| Ella Unlimited chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
Wow, the ending that was never published. It was awesome! :) This should've been the ending...
| Bia T. Mey chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
it's okay... But as many peope know , Doon and Lina are both 12...
| sweets-buttons chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
it's up to Doon and Lina to .. eh.. keep the population alive, eh?
| cookie-pocky-strawberry-love chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
this was really good
| ShadowRose18 chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
DoonxLina, cute and fluffy. All things an awesome one-shot should be _
Brilliant job and the writing was really good. I think this should have been the ending :D
Great job, keep it up!
| LucyCrewe11 chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
That was a nice Doon/Lina one-shot. I enjoyed reading it.
| tallonfoot357 chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
oh that was cute!