Reviews for Transitions
jenefaner chapter 2 . 6/12/2011
This is a very good read! Would you please pick it back up? There are to few engaging stories in the PB/CoR section like this one. It really would be a shame to see this go unfinished.
17629578269 chapter 2 . 6/6/2007
good story, can't wait to see where you're going with this.
LiasonFan2 chapter 2 . 3/7/2007
I swore to myself that I was not going to beg for an update. However, it's been two years could we please get something I insanely miss this story so much and it just getting so damn good.. The tension between each other was off the charts and Kyra kissing Riddick and that figh woah! Please Please Please update when/if you can soon please
NightmareMonster chapter 2 . 8/16/2006
o i love this story. but you gotta update. PLZ
AliasSpyCrazy chapter 2 . 2/14/2006
damn that was good. WHY DID YOU STOP THERE? You know that wasnt playing nice. Dont be a big bully and leave us hanging like that. I mean this thing was awesome. How they fought and then kissed, totally hot. You have to keep writing, please
Girl-who-sings-the-blues chapter 1 . 1/23/2006
Wow! Kyra kicks donkey !

You seem to really know how to incorporate the fighting scenes REALLY nice, Kyra must really like...er, I mean hate him...But deep down...
Girl-who-sings-the-blues chapter 2 . 1/23/2006
...Aw...

that bites...Riddick is her weakness?

And that's the reason why he didn't take her with him?

He's horrible! But...that was a awesome piece of writing, loved how you brought it out. It kinda just blew me away...

Neato Chapter, please continue
lamyka chapter 2 . 10/28/2005
not bad, pretty good fic. hopefully you continue it long enough to give it closure.

good luck,

lamyka
tini243 chapter 2 . 10/19/2005
Wow, this is so great. Please continue soon.

And as for the OOCness, the way you wrote him, he was 100percent Riddick. The one-liners (most authors have him talk way too much) the carefully hidden emotions, you really have this character down pat.

Same goes for your characterization of Jack/Kyra.

Curious as to what you have in store for them.
Social control chapter 2 . 9/19/2005
omg please keep going, this is super good
sleepingbaby22 chapter 1 . 3/14/2005
please write more it been a long time since you have writen any thing so hurry up and write
BookWorm1990 chapter 1 . 2/9/2005
*claps* I love it! you did such a great job megan! describing jack through this chapter gave me a view into her history since PB. and i wounder where riddick went? and if he knows she's leavint the planet...to get away from him. great great GREAT! love it of course!
Twitch in my eye chapter 2 . 2/9/2005
please continue soon. i'll be waiting!
Storm Dragoness chapter 2 . 2/6/2005
This is awesome, I hope you will update soon.
mklingenberg chapter 2 . 1/31/2005
interesting, in a very good way, keep the chapters commin
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