This story is haunting and beautiful. It reminds me of the truths of the world, truths we (society) like to pretend do not exist. And, perhaps most importantly, it reminds me the importance of hope. Bravo and well done.

A great must read. Like every story ever written, there were parts I skimmed as, to me, they were uninteresting. But you both did a fantastic job. It sort of reminded me a bit of GoT in the feeling of the story, at least the first 5 seasons anyway.

Enough said, loved it. Good luck on anything else you write.

So i know you have finished with this story but i have to bring up the fact that on the mobile app the first word of every paragraph is separated as if you hit enter after it if you have the time to fix this that would he great.

What a frustrating read, for all of Harry's power and supposed skill after being touted as someone who could beat the best duelists in the world he is pretty much useless against Voldemort. I don't know what the author is trying to do here but it's like he is making him sound OP but can't deliver.

For such powerful people that the North are so supposed to represent they get pushed around very easily. I'm confused as to how the author is going to make Hermione, Dumbledore and ron feel bad about their stupid decisions but I hope it comes soon because this is starting to get frustrating

Wow, that was incredibly lame. After all that training he gets his ass handed to him in the softest way possible.

This is great. And though I'd have much preferred a lot slower romance, I'm oddly fond of a good/repentant Bellatrix.

A lot of stuff about this fic that i really like and a lot of stuff that i didn’t. All in i’m glad I read it.

A great story, I really enjoyed reading it.

And there goes another one. Exonerate yourself by being all noble and shoving your burden off onto Harry. Who is helping Harry with his feelings and mental anguish at being betrayed and tormented? Not the Weasley's, not Hermione, not Dumbledore, not the Order. Hmmm only Bellatrix? Sort of, she is all giddy about being pregnant... and she is pushing the betrayers towards him. No one, that's who is helping Harry with his wounded mind.

Way to go Hermione. Completely diminish and disregard Harry's feelings as irrelevant while you whine about your own oh so superior emotions and mental needs. Obviously all about me me me, once again betraying Harry. Oh yeah, so Herm and Ginny both think to declare Harry's innocence in one breath and speculate on his potential to torture and kill them in revenge the next. Why wouldn't Harry be thrilled with their new opinion of him.

I have a big secret...just kidding. Let's tell a whole bunch of children at Hogwarts...and Narcissa before we know if we have control over her instead of V. And yeah, let's have our military ally spill the beans directly just in case Dumbledore is a little slow on the uptake.

Aw man i wish we could have gotten an update on a few more people, is neville with Parvati? Where did hermione end up? And i guess he is staying away for a while? But great story none the less

What a low effort and rushed start. I'd rather not continue reading this.

I was enjoying this, but it's now dragging on big time, harry just keeps taking it all on the chin? Nahhh I don't believe it, not to mention every chapter is basically the same as the previous, constant harry bashing, constant Weasley bashing etc, it gets boring really quick