This is pretty OOC for Dumbledore.

I enjoyed most of the story, didn't really like much of the last part, especially difderent plains of existence and summoning dark creatures etc i didn't think it went well with the rest of the story, but thank you very much for writing the story, hope you'll find inspiration to write more stories for our delight, cheers!

Not gonna lie, I would forgive Hermione and even Ron but it could take years to win the trust back. Trust doesn't grow on trees, even if it did, the apple fell from the tree in this case.

An excellent story.

Oh, aside from what I wrote about him not showing a lot of emotions. I'm still reading and I'm loving it! Just wanted to make sure I didn't come across as a hater lol

I don't really like how you don't write about Harry being angry and defect to sayings like 'no use getting angry', 'set aside feelings', 'out of sight out of the mind'. Give him a human soul, will you? Being emotionless is not human at all. He was unjustly sent to Azkaban and isn't even allowed to feel frustrated because the writer is a tibetan monk? Harry isn't a tibetan monk.

Harry's little rants are getting repetitive as are the attacks from the order, I swear it's like you're just recycling the same crap over and over at this point.

Gotta say that I liked this story a lot better when it was written by Lord Silvere, there has been way to much of this emotional diarrhea since the other guy took over.

I don't get why Harry didn't just let Voldie wipe out the order. After what the did to him, he should have just let nature take it's course.

these last few chapters have been sooooooooo bloody boring, all they're doing is talking about feelings and forgiveness and it's a drag. If Harry has an issue, give him a tissue and tell him to get over it already! I couldn't give a toss about Ginny's emotional turmoil and I thought that dedicating an entire chapter to her realization of Harry's innocence and her subsequent betrayal was unnecessary. The only thing of interest in the past five or so chapters has been the ambush Harry is planning at the ministry and maybe... maybe the mystery prisoner Voldemort captured a chapter or two previous, other than that it's been dreadfully dull since the ambush in the seaside village.

Harry was kind of a wimp in that duel, he seems to only use lethal spells when it is convenient to the plot, otherwise he uses the order special. If Harry could summon Voldemort then why could he not hit him with something that would actually do some damage while he was flying through the air?

I thought Fudge was replaced two chapters back?

what is the point of throwing stunners at Voldemort?

wow, Harry really is a dumbass. He was way too slow on uptake of what Voldemort was doing to be plausible.

The order's dogged belief in Harry's evil intentions is almost comical. I know Harry getting sent to prison was cruciL to the plot but the way it was done is unrealistic. Dumbledore is way OC in this story and the Order are more like lemmings than the characters JKR created . It feels like drama for dramas sake whenever Harry has dealing with Dumbles and co. and that kind of ruins the vibe of the story.