Reviews for Earl of the North |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hermione's a Muggleborn, not a Half Blood... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im pissed af, I loved this story until this point, but I absolutely hate the fact that Harry will forgive Hermione. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Harry will forgive Hermione? Cmon man... Thats annoying as fuck |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have a feeling that the death eaters will catch Hermione and Harry will save her and forgive her. He better not forgive her, I hate fics in which Ron and Hermione betray Harry or don't stand by his side and then later on they run back to him and Harry forgives them. |
![]() ![]() Hahahaha |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you are someone like me who reads reviews before reading a story please heed this advise. DO NOT READ THIS STORY! Instead read his other story DELANDA EST. This story is awful. It reads like a 13 yr old with a modicum of talent wrote this but has no clue that adding so many plot points and really bad ones at that make for shit story. Character personalities are exaggerated and/or dumbed down. There are massive leaps of logic. If you are going to ignore this advice read this story after DELANDA EST, trust me you will be grateful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting. good read |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, again really love the concept. But I've been thinking... Spirit Butler/Secretary? I feel like a Magical Portrait would of been better served since they are so common already in the Wizarding World. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Umm... so, amazing concept. even using Bella. But she's so out of character it's almost hard to read. That being said, amazing concept. I'll keep reading as I really want to see where you take this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not gonna lie. I'm very interested in reading an alternate version where bellatrix isnt involved and harry marries the ice princesses. It would basically be a harem with no risk or bi stuff happening to ruin it |
![]() ![]() ![]() now that I think about it would have been interesting to see the baby grow up and go to war for him at least once. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kind of a bleak ending. Could've added a chapter showing their lives past it all and how it changed them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, it's idiotic that Bellatrix had an urge to vomit to a disembodied head. You made her too meek to such things for no reason. She can disagree with the action but she probably did worse in her days of service and enough times for it to not affect her. I'd have expected her to maybe even be glad somewhat with him being killed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is a good read, but I am not a fan of this wrongly accused harry story. 7/10 |