The old woman bellatrix _teenage boy harry couple spoils the story for me. Why ?! I was hoping for vengence on the traitors from the light.. I m not looking for this big age difference and illogical romance

thats twice now you have used legilimency in the wrong context, first with the island sensing thing, and now with the letter, legilimency is used to probe and read or attack someones mind kind of like focused telepathy, it does not however allow one to sense the truth in written words no matter how skilled the wielder may be lol, it also does not allow one the ability to sense the presence of others.

It gets absolutely boring to keep reading someone or the other always finding ways to manipulate Harry’s head. Fic was good so far but if theres forgiveness, it’ll lose all credibility. Harry was right - he can let Hermione go and not have anything to do with her. Don’t understand why Bellatrix has a problem with that and feels she should manipulate her husband - who she feels she doesn’t deserve - to being friends with her again..

shit i though i read I'll start touching you everywhere in the last sentence

why didn't Voldemort kil bella ? i mean it could have been a of showing what happens to traitors

the warning threw me off I'm reading this first, then ill look into the other fics

what a great fic
loved it

so thought the traitor was ron

i say ron is the traitor

bad move dumbles well try to steal the staff rod whatever it is to use for the greater good shit

where the hell does voldy keep getting so many death eaters the population of magical britain is not that big it is a small island country after all

once a traitor always a traitor if i was harry i would never trust any of them again

sweet dumbles got yelled at

amelia bones has never been in the order she also hates dumbles because some of her family was in the order and they died.

right out of all the illegal stuff fudge has done the one brings him down is giving a portkey to a muggle born