|Reviews for Earl of the North|
| wiebenor chapter 50 . 1/13
I'm pretty sure the story you referenced in the first chapter, "para bellum" I've read, as the title sounds familiar, but if not I've probably heard about it at the very least which could also be why it sounds familiar... That said, I must disagree with the statement implying that this story isn't as good as para bellum, because I think it is. But then again, maybe I'm just weird like that, who knows?
Not the best story in terms of plot, but it WAS and IS a good enough story to finish it, even if I thought the Ron-bashing/OOC Ron was a bit much. Despite the fact that I feel even an OOC Ron wouldn't be this bad, and even Molly wouldn't ever be this bad, I still decided that it was good enough to favorite, just in case I wanted to find it again. Don't get me wrong, there's stories where Ron acting that way would be ok, but in those, there's an explanation in the plot for it, whereas here, Molly AND Ron are this way no matter what happens, just because he's guilty until proven innocent
| Gast chapter 50 . 1/12
Love, peace, and harmony at the end - simply ridiculous.
| Pegueng chapter 13 . 1/2
Mmuuuahahhahhah, I just envisions Snape's quiet patronising voice " Good luck" Bwahhahhahha
| Pegueng chapter 1 . 1/1
Bwwahahaa, only the foreword to the first chapter made it worth it to read this. It sounds as if you haven't the foggiest what you have written and published here.
| Erizar chapter 32 . 12/10/2022
Bellatrixes wish for the reconciliation makes sense, Harry granting it would be the height of idiocy. Hermoine would be next to useless after this, she has zero convictions of her own anymore aside from perfect servitude. She can become an servant or ally, but never a friend. Same situation of Wormtail repented assuming James and Lilly survived his attempted betrayal. They might let go of their anger and leave him to live his own life, but he could never be a friend again.
| Erizar chapter 30 . 12/10/2022
Not a fan of the asspull way Hermoine "figured out" how to find Harry. The ministry might be incompetent, but surely this method of tracking a hidden location would have been discovered ages ago. And the obvious counter to this method would be severe consequences, either mind whipes or death. Anything else means that hidden locations can be EASILY located by repeating this method to triangulate the location.
| feauxen chapter 38 . 11/26/2022
this chapter seems to be mislabeled as chapter 37...
| InARealPickle chapter 50 . 11/3/2022
I loved this story so freaking much!
| Majestic Hero chapter 48 . 10/24/2022
Harry shooting Voldy was the funniest shit ever
| pghammer21 chapter 50 . 10/24/2022
As to why Harry is a recluse - why should Harry - let alone his household, which includes Bellatrix, their kids eventually, and Neville - have anything to do with Wizarding Britain? Money is covered - it is all at North Gringotts. Nairicaix is a self-contained society on the order of the Hawaiians of the 17th century or the Inuit (Alaska) before the Russians came along in that same century?
| Slowest Turtle chapter 47 . 8/22/2022
This Harry's a real dumb shit
| Jaeharerys chapter 17 . 7/29/2022
| Za-Kami chapter 2 . 7/20/2022
Also, he could've easily given an oath on his life/magic that he didn't betray anyone.
| Za-Kami chapter 1 . 7/20/2022
Legilimency costs nothing to use. Also, Snape would've easily seen anything suspicious. Not to mention, common sense dictates that Harry wouldn't betray the Light for his parents murderer.
| LordKnight007 chapter 50 . 7/3/2022
Definitely one of the Most Beautiful Story I have ever read! I don't know why I chose not to read this before since I saw this a lot when searching for stories, probably because of some of the reviews! I had hoped that the Epilogue would be about Harry and his family though, I would have loved to Harry and his family finally in peace. I dont think I'll reread this story though, there's a lot of frustrating moments that almost made me stop reading and I dont think I want to go through that again. Anyways, Thanks for writing such a Wonderful piece of story!