|Reviews for Watcher|
| werd me chapter 1 . 2/14
Are you dead?
| geetac chapter 15 . 1/10
I like the chapter
| Guest chapter 15 . 1/2
| Guest chapter 15 . 1/2
| Jess chapter 15 . 12/28/2013
Great story! You said you'd update as long as you're alive. does that mean you're dead? hehe my lame attempt at a joke. I love how you wrote Harry's character. snape is one of my favorite characters also so i love the interactions there. hopefully you will come back
| Guest chapter 15 . 12/28/2013
Brilliant story. You really should update it soon, if you can. I love Snape's portrayal here. he's an awesome character. Six years and i still havent lost hope yet lol
| JustADreamer423 chapter 3 . 7/29/2013
You really, really need to learn to proofread, or get a beta. I've come across the stupidest errors... like filling his, "back" instead of his bag, or change instead of chance... Seriously, fix your errors. No one is going to want to continue to try and figure out what the hell you're trying to say, it gets really tiresome.
| Jasmine chapter 7 . 7/2/2013
I forgot to mention in my last review that your story isn't all that bad, but it could be better.
| Jasmine chapter 4 . 7/2/2013
Comment: Honestly, you've fell in the pit of female Blaise Zabini. He's a guy, damnit!
Question: Why does every fanfiction I read have female Blasie Zabini or misspelled his last name as Zambini?
Comment: I'm aware it is fanfiction, but the only couple of characters I don't care if they're genderbended are Harry Potter, Draco Malfoy, or Ronald Weasley. -_- Blaise Zabini genderbended irritates me to no end.
| CrowNoYami chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
hello i was wondering if this story has a main pairing ?
| Cathy Crimson chapter 15 . 5/24/2013
I love how you make Harry sound both smart and cold (watcher suits him perfectly!), it makes me happy that someone changed his character, in my oppinion Harry was far too normal before. I still like the ornginal books very much but this story is interesting. The character seems more original and I like it how you write from different perspectives. You have great potential Mira, I will be waiting eagerly for the next chapter.
Ps. The devil is more honest than god because the truth hurts more- but that doesn't mean he doesn't lie. I've allways preffered the devil to god- I feel he is much more intelligent. Have you noticed how all angels have the same face? I somehow don't know if their smiles are true or feke but you can never trust the devil, thats why he doesn't leave the opption of being betrayed.
Thank you for writing this awesome story about a boy who's not a demon n'or an angel but who still wants to change the world.
| kahurikuul chapter 5 . 3/31/2013
I am curious why you Blaise Zabini a girl?
Any particular reason?
Anyway, I love this fic, I truly do. You're spinning the story in an intriguing way. I'll wait until I've read more to write a more thorough review, but I can already see it's heading in a interesting direction.
| Math-lv chapter 15 . 3/18/2013
Innteresting story you have here. Its a pity, there hasn't been an update for 6 years (so probably there wont be one).
| Virena Setiss chapter 3 . 2/10/2013
My gosh, your English is better than most people I know that have English as their first language! I salute you and your amazingness. I like your writing and I like the plot, and I like that you're amazing.
So, yep, positive review-ness from me over here.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
i hate snape