|Reviews for Past The End Of Your Nose|
| KariRedlock chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
I sense some drunken shenanigans in the future 8D
| Arwen Thandiel chapter 7 . 1/16/2014
Very well done! You really held the suspense. I loved the confusion and miscommunication. Great job :)
| JustAhReader chapter 7 . 4/16/2013
Whats with the reviews?Twenty? This story is so beautiful that it brought tears to my eyes...mentally.
Thanks for writing this masterpiece for us :)
| UltimateNinjaOfDoom chapter 7 . 1/9/2013
well that was interesting very interesting indeed ;)
| cje24576 chapter 7 . 8/11/2011
This was very good. But, did you have to leave it like that? I want more mush! Please! At least could you add more to the one on your other website? Please.
| little rosebud chapter 7 . 11/19/2010
Why the hell does this story only have seventeen reviews? It deserves SO much more! Your fic is flawlessly and beautifully written. The characters are true to themselves, and that is a feat few of us manage to do.
I hope you are proud of yourself for this fanfiction, cause it truly is wonderful and it has been my pleasure to read it!
Keep going, you've got some serious talent! :)
| ThePuppet7 chapter 7 . 9/1/2009
| Opened-Eyes chapter 7 . 2/13/2008
last chapter was so...intense and so WOW!...
great story 5 stars *
| DiedInTheVault chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
ya know, i wonder why i only see 14 reviews hmm ? well make the that 15...it is worth a LOT more... i love it, really, you did a good job on this one. thank you ! hope you keep on writing LOTR' fictions,
good luck XD
an Cheers X3
| wetheril chapter 7 . 4/13/2007
I felt it was right to review everything I read. You are talented-your stories weave a spell, and I cannot help but read non-stop until the very end. Despite whatever flaws others point out, your greatest strength lies in characterization. I really enjoy reading the dialogue between the characters, both major and minor. Also, I commend the fact that you didn't portray Gimli as only a laughing stock, but you show his wisdom as a confidant and friend-something a lot of writers who include Gimli tend not to do.
| Lyless and Lockesilver chapter 7 . 3/21/2007
aww so sweet...in a disturbing sort of way...
| Luna-Lunak chapter 7 . 6/26/2006
Would you belived if I say I loved it? The best scens were surely waiting for Legolas (! chapter and epilog) and 'I just want to see Leoglas' and 'I cannot'. Loved them all and loved whole fic. _
| Arynn chapter 7 . 12/30/2005
Average amount of semen, one teaspoon
(from 0.3 to 15 mL) And diet affects
is staffed by medical
doctors to answer health questions. Put in
"anal sex" to search and you may find the
only article I've found that gives statistics:
25% of male-male couples NEVER (repeat,
NEVER) have anal sex. Touching alone
produces male orgasm. A lot neater and
more aesthetic or spiritual than anal sex.
50% have done it at least once;
25% do it often.
The anus is designed to allow feces,
the offal, the excrement, bowel movement,
the poo, doo-doo, or
whatever you call it, to exit the body.
If kept inside, this amalgam of bacteria
and decayed matter would quickly make
people seriously ill.
The anus is NOT a vagina. It has NO
lubrication of its own. A wet finger
won't help; indeed, if that finger then
enters the mouth, diarrhea will result,
whether from some exotic bacteria or
virus or from plain old Escherichia
People who engage in anal sex follow some
rules (usually after drinking alcohol).
One-the receiver must control the speed
and degree of penetration.
Two-an enormous amount of lubrication
must be used.
Three-there are 2 round muscles just
inside the anus. These sphincters are meant
to keep feces inside during working hours.
(Some anal sex participants eventually
develop fecal incontinence.) They are tight,
but can be loosened with lubrication and
lots of time and patience.
I had hoped your story would end with the
usual male orgasm and not promise anal
Anal sex is dangerous because the
skin of the intestine is fragile, thin,
and can be broken with force. Even if the
break (fissure) is near the anus, it is
painful and can become infected. Anal sex
is the easiest way to catch nearly all of
man's most deadly diseases. An erect penis
is a formidable weapon, large in size when
engorged (they all end up the same size
when erect despite their original flaccid
size). If the skin of the intestine is
torn, it can be life threatening and
excruciating as bowel enters the abdomen
Did you know that with prison rape, 96% or
more of the perpetrators are heterosexual?
It is a thing of power over another being.
Rape is all about power.
Hope this helps.
| Lyn chapter 5 . 12/30/2005
I can't remember if I have mentioned this
before, but it is imperative that
NO fluid be placed in an unresponsive
person's mouth...it will enter the LUNGS,
not the stomach.
The reason is, a small flap of tissue
separates the two tubes that are side
by side, one leading to the stomach,
the one in front (the windpipe)
leading to the lungs. This flap of
tissue only works properly when a
person is alert and responsive.
Even then, it is quite common for
people to inadvertently inhale while
trying to swallow and thus choke.
PLEASE-do not have any characters
try to "replace fluid lost" in this
manner. It is sad, but fluid cannot
be replaced unless a person is
conscious enough to drink for themselves.
(Ergo, until recently, people who
were in comas just became dehydrated.)
Ask your doctor to verify this.
I wouldn't be so fervent in this request
except for the fear that some reader
might take this as true and practice
it on some helpless person with
Otherwise, the story is well written,
holds one's attention, makes the
reader eager to read more and in addition
is easy to read (some stories are
impossible to follow the story line
but yours flows easily from start
| Merry Magic chapter 7 . 2/20/2005
I absolutly love this story. Your writing style and how you wrote the characters were great.